Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clear, grammatically correct and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g. “Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.”). Then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words (because, so, and) and correct vocabulary. Correct common mistakes: use past tense consistently, say “when I was a child” not “when I watershed,” use “in the countryside,” and avoid unclear phrases like “many shy or teenagers.” Keep to at most 4–5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I grew up in the countryside, so there wasn’t much public transport, and my bike was my main way to get around. Because it was cheap and convenient, I used it to visit friends and run small errands.

제안: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and examples. Use correct grammar (singular/plural agreement, articles) and linking words (because, for example, therefore). Be concise and avoid filler phrases like “it's like.”

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many households own at least one. For example, people use bikes to run short errands or visit relatives since they are cheap and convenient, especially in small towns where distances are short.

× Yes, it is when I watershed.

✓ Yes, it was when I was a child.

The student used 'is' and 'watershed' incorrectly. The question asks about the past, so past tense 'was' is required (Present tense 'is' is wrong). 'Watershed' is unrelated and likely an incorrect word choice; use 'a child' to convey the intended meaning. Suggestion: use past simple for past states (I was a child).

× I live in a countryside so there wasn't much public transport.

✓ I lived in the countryside so there wasn't much public transport.

Use of 'a countryside' is incorrect; 'countryside' as a general area typically takes the definite article 'the' or no article. Also the context is past (when you were a child), so change present 'live' to past 'lived'. Suggestion: match past context and use 'the countryside'.

× Many shy or teenagers or we use a bicycle to travel or visit their friends.

✓ Many children or teenagers used bicycles to travel or visit their friends.

The sentence has multiple problems: 'shy' is likely wrong word choice; subject-verb agreement and plural/singular inconsistency exist. 'Many ... use' should match plural subject; because context is past, use 'used'. Also 'a bicycle' should be plural 'bicycles' after 'many'. Suggestion: choose correct noun (children) and match verb tense and plurality.

× In my opinions, bicycle are really popular in my country as every household have at least one bike and it's like convenient to use for travel for a short travel like visit friends or relatives.

✓ In my opinion, bicycles are really popular in my country because every household has at least one bike and it's convenient to use for short trips to visit friends or relatives.

Multiple errors: 'opinions' should be singular 'opinion' after 'in'; 'bicycle' should be plural 'bicycles'; subject-verb agreement: 'every household has' (singular subject requires 'has'); 'it's like convenient' is informal and ungrammatical—use 'it's convenient'; 'a short travel' should be 'short trips'. Suggestion: use correct singular/plural forms and standard collocations ('short trips').