Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve düzenli kurun. Önce doğrudan konu cümlesi kurun (ör. “Evet, çocukken bisikletim vardı.”), sonra bir veya iki destekleyici detay verin. Ayrıca dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin (örn. “when I was a child”, “it was big and pink”, “there were flowers on my bike”, “I used to ride it every weekend with my friends”). Akış için bağlantı ifadeleri kullanın (e.g. “and”, “so”, “because”).

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was big and pink with flower stickers on the frame, and I used to ride it every weekend with my friends. We often rode to the park because it was close to our neighborhood.

제안: Cevabınızı daha net ve tutarlı yapın. Önce doğrudan görüşünüzü söyleyin (ör. “No, I don’t think bikes are very popular.”), sonra nedenini açık ve spesifik nedenlerle açıklayın. Yanlış kelime kullanımlarına dikkat edin (örn. “bars” yerine “buses” veya “cars”; “trials” muhtemelen “cyclists” veya “young people” demek istediniz). Bağlaçlarla neden-sonuç ilişkisi kurun (e.g. “because”, “so”).

예시: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Most people prefer cars or public transport because the roads are busy and there are few bike lanes. As a result, only a small number of cyclists, mostly young people or hobby riders, use bikes regularly.

× I did have a bike when I was child

✓ I did have a bike when I was a child

The noun 'child' needs the indefinite article 'a' to be grammatically correct in this context. Use 'a child' to indicate one member of the group 'children'. Suggestion: Add 'a' before 'child' whenever referring to being 'a child' in past descriptions.

× it was a a big and pink and there is some flowers in my bike

✓ It was big and pink, and there were some flowers on my bike

Multiple issues: duplicate 'a a' — remove extra article. Coordinate adjectives do not need 'and' between them; use commas or 'and' appropriately. 'There is' should match plural noun 'flowers', so use 'there were'. Preposition for attachments on a bike is 'on' not 'in'. Suggestion: Remove duplicate words, use 'big and pink' or 'big, pink', change 'there is' to 'there were' for plural past, and use 'on' for placement.

× and I used to ride it every weekend with my friends and I'm. Riding in.

✓ and I used to ride it every weekend with my friends, and I was riding it then

Fragment and incorrect use of present continuous 'I'm. Riding in.' The phrase 'used to' indicates a habitual past action; continue with past construction. The fragment should be connected and expressed as a complete clause, e.g., 'I was riding it then' or remove entirely. Suggestion: Replace the fragment with a full past clause consistent with 'used to' (habitual past), or simply end after 'friends'.

× I don't think so. The bikes are popular in my country because the people are driving cars, bars or something else.

✓ I don't think so. Bikes are not very popular in my country because people drive cars, buses, or use other transport

Awkward present progressive 'are driving' is unnecessary for general facts; use simple present 'drive'. 'The bikes' and 'the people' use unnecessary definite article; use general plural 'bikes' and 'people'. 'bars' is likely a typo for 'buses' or 'cars, buses' — corrected to 'buses' to make sense. Suggestion: Use simple present for habitual/general statements and remove unnecessary definite articles. Correct nouns ('buses' instead of 'bars').

× Only the trials can ride bike.

✓ Only cyclists or those who train can ride bikes

The sentence is ungrammatical: 'trials' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'cyclists' or 'those who train'. 'Ride bike' needs an article or plural: 'ride bikes' or 'ride a bike'. Suggestion: Use the correct noun ('cyclists' or 'people who train') and pluralize 'bikes' or include an article.