Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and sentence structure, give a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details using linking words. Mention time frame correctly (use past tense) and add a brief reason or memory. Keep it natural and within 3–4 sentences.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family was quite poor and we lived in the countryside. As a result, we didn’t own cars or motorcycles either, so I usually got around on foot or by riding the farm animals. I remember walking several kilometers to school most days, which made me used to being active.

제안: Answer directly with a clear opinion, use linking words to compare groups, and give specific reasons or examples. Use correct grammar and complete sentences (use subject-verb agreement and articles). Limit to 2–3 supporting sentences.

예시: I think bicycles are moderately popular in my country, but their use depends on the area. In cities many people prefer cars or public transport because distances are longer, while in rural areas and among students bikes are still common due to their low cost and convenience. Overall, cycling is more popular for short trips and exercise than for daily commuting in big cities.

× I don't have a bike when I was child because I was poor and live in countryside.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because we were poor and lived in the countryside.

Mixed tenses and missing articles: The question asks about the past, so use past tense consistently (didn't have, were, lived). 'When I was child' is missing the article 'a' before 'child'. 'I' to 'we' matches later 'We don't have' context; either is possible but 'we were poor' matches the original 'we' in next sentence. Add 'the' before 'countryside'. Use past tense for 'live' -> 'lived'. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense and include necessary articles (a/the).

× We don't have bike, cars, motor, just animals.

✓ We didn't have bikes, cars, or motorcycles; just animals.

Number and vocabulary: In the past context, use past tense 'didn't have'. Items should be pluralized when speaking generally (bikes, cars). 'Motor' is unclear; 'motorcycles' or 'motorbikes' is appropriate. Use 'or' to list alternatives and a semicolon or comma plus conjunction for clarity. Suggestion: Pluralize countable nouns when referring generally and use the correct compound nouns (motorcycles).

× Maybe a bike popular in our country, but.

✓ Maybe bikes are popular in our country, but...

Tense and word order: 'Maybe a bike popular' is incorrect word order and article usage. To state a general truth, use the present simple with subject-verb agreement: 'bikes are popular'. Omit 'a' when speaking about bikes in general. The sentence is also incomplete; add an ellipsis or finish the contrast. Suggestion: Use plural subject for general statements and include the verb 'are'.

× Some of people use cars, not bike or walking.

✓ Some people use cars instead of bikes or walking.

Pronoun/phrase use and parallelism: 'Some of people' should be 'Some people' or 'Some of the people'. 'Not bike or walking' is ungrammatical and lacks parallel structure. Use 'instead of' and make list items parallel: 'use cars, ride bikes, or walk' or 'use cars instead of bikes or walking' (better: 'use cars rather than bikes or walking'). Also pluralize 'bike' to 'bikes'. Suggestion: Use correct quantifier phrase 'Some people' and maintain parallel structure when listing alternatives.