Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve accuracy and fluency: correct verb choice and remove redundant words; use a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Keep it natural and under five sentences. For example, say you rode the bike around the village and mention a specific memory or purpose. Use linking words like "so" or "and" to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my village to visit friends and buy small things from the local shop. Because it was the quickest way to get around, I used it almost every day.

제안: Increase clarity and vocabulary: avoid hesitations and repetition, give a clear reason and one specific example or comparison. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "for example", "so") and a concise structure: topic sentence + one supporting detail + brief example.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are inexpensive and convenient. For example, many people use bicycles for short trips to work or the market since they are faster than walking and cheaper than driving.

× I used to write it in in my the house village to explore the neighborhood.

✓ I used to ride it around my house and village to explore the neighborhood.

The original sentence misuses 'write' instead of 'ride' (wrong verb) and has incorrect word order and duplicate words ('in in', 'my the house village'). This is a sentence structure and word choice problem but per the allowed list, it best fits 'Verb in the present participle form' because the intended action requires the correct verb form and verb selection. Correct by replacing 'write' with 'ride' and reordering the phrase to 'ride it around my house and village'. Also remove duplicate words. Use 'around' to indicate moving through areas and separate 'house' and 'village' with 'and' for clarity.

× I think the bikes are, well, very popular in my country because it's easy to and it's easy and convenient to go anywhere.

✓ I think bicycles are very popular in my country because they make it easy and convenient to get anywhere.

The original has repetition ('it's easy to and it's easy and convenient') and an unclear subject reference ('it' referring to 'bikes'). This is a present tense and pronoun clarity issue. Correct by using 'bicycles' (more natural) and a plural pronoun 'they' to agree with the plural subject. Rephrase to 'they make it easy and convenient to get anywhere' to avoid repetition and to create a grammatically complete and natural present-tense sentence.