Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, clarity and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, use correct past tense and pronouns, and add one or two concise supporting details with linking words. Keep answers natural and within 2–4 sentences. For example, say you did not own a bike but tried one occasionally, give a brief reason and a short detail about how often you used it.

예시: I didn’t own a bike when I was a child, but I tried riding one a few times. For example, my friend let me use his bike during weekends, so I rode around the neighborhood occasionally to have fun.

제안: Make your opinion clear with a topic sentence, then support it with specific reasons using linking words (e.g., because, however, for example). Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and use more precise vocabulary (commuting, leisure, climate). Limit to 2–4 sentences and avoid repetition.

예시: Bikes are somewhat popular for leisure but not widely used for daily commuting in my country. For example, many people join weekend cycling groups, but most avoid biking to work because heavy traffic and hot weather make it impractical.

× When I were a child.

✓ When I was a child.

The subject 'I' requires the singular past form 'was', not 'were'. Use 'was' for first-person singular in past tense. Suggestion: memorize 'I was' for past simple statements about yourself.

× I I have a bike, actually I don't I did not own one because I was trying bike once.

✓ I had a bike — actually I did not own one; I only tried a bike once.

Mixed and incorrect tense and repetition: 'I have' (present) conflicts with past context 'When I was a child'. Use past tense 'had' or better: if you didn't own one, say 'I did not own one' and 'I only tried a bike once'. Remove duplicated 'I'. Also add articles where needed ('a bike'). Suggestion: keep tense consistent (past) and avoid repeating words.

× I always.

✓ I never did.

Fragment: 'I always.' is incomplete and unclear. Based on context (saying you didn't own a bike), the intended meaning is likely 'I never did' or 'I never rode one regularly.' Use a full clause with verb. Suggestion: complete the sentence with a verb and object to convey the idea.

× There are some interesting group they are they go for ride together.

✓ There are some interesting groups that go for rides together.

Number agreement and sentence structure: 'group' should be plural 'groups' to match 'some'. 'they are they go for ride' is redundant and ungrammatical; use a relative clause 'that go for rides together'. Plural 'rides' required after 'for'. Suggestion: ensure subjects and determiners agree in number and avoid repeating pronouns.

× So it's like the sport, but it's not popular in the real situation.

✓ So it's like a sport, but it's not very popular in real life.

Article and collocation: use 'a sport' not 'the sport'. 'in the real situation' is unnatural; correct phrase is 'in real life'. Also add modifier 'very' if intended. Suggestion: use common collocations such as 'in real life'.

× In the real life you not use that much because of the traffic and the weather.

✓ In real life, people don't use them much because of the traffic and the weather.

Pronoun and negation issues: 'you not use' is incorrect negation and 'you' is informal/general; better to use 'people' or 'they'. Also 'that' should refer to bikes -> 'them'. Use auxiliary 'do' for negation: 'do not' -> 'don't'. Suggestion: use 'people don't' for general statements and match pronouns to the noun ('them' for bikes).

× It's so hot. So that's.

✓ It's very hot, so people avoid cycling.

Fragment and unclear reference: 'So that's.' is incomplete and does not convey a full idea. Expand to explain consequence: 'so people avoid cycling' or 'so it's not common.' Also use 'very hot' instead of 'so hot' for clarity in formal correction. Suggestion: complete the thought to show cause and effect.