Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is direct and relevant, but it can be improved by using a clearer topic sentence and adding one concise supporting detail. Avoid repeating ideas (e.g., “in my childhood” and “childhood”) and keep the response to under five sentences. Use a linking word if you add a reason or short explanation.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike as a child. However, I own one now because I needed a convenient way to commute to work. It’s become my main mode of transport for short trips.

제안: Your answer shows opinion and reason, but grammar and clarity need work. Make the topic sentence concise, correct word order, and avoid repetition (‘personal personal’). Use a linking word to connect your reason and add a specific example or statistic to strengthen the response.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people use bicycles for commuting to work and running errands, especially in cities where traffic is heavy, so cycling is both practical and economical.

× No, I didn't have a bike in my childhood, but now I have a bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but now I have one.

The original uses 'in my childhood' which is grammatically acceptable but unnatural in spoken English; more natural is 'when I was a child'. Also repeating 'bike' is redundant; replace second 'a bike' with pronoun or 'one'. Maintain past tense 'didn't have' for childhood and present 'have' for now. Suggestion: use natural time expression and avoid repetition.

× Yes, I think so. Bikes are popular in my country because they usually people used to go with their own bike, like for their work or some personal personal activity.

✓ Yes, I think so. Bikes are popular in my country because people usually use their own bikes to go to work or for personal activities.

Multiple problems: word order and verb form: 'they usually people used to go' is ungrammatical—subject 'people' should come before verb and the correct verb is 'use' not 'used'. Use present simple 'people usually use' to state a general fact. 'Their own bike' should be plural 'their own bikes' to match 'people' (or use 'a bike' for each person). Remove duplicate word 'personal'. Preposition 'to go to work' is standard. Change 'some personal personal activity' to 'personal activities'. These corrections follow present tense and plural agreement.