Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, clarity and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence stating you had a bike, fix verb forms and possessive meaning, and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it under five sentences. For example, correct "I used to have a bike when I was child" to "I used to have a bike when I was a child." Clarify who gave the gift (if it was for you or from your mother) and use correct verb forms ("I liked riding it every day"), and replace "sunburn" phrasing with "I sometimes got sunburned."

예시: I used to have a bike when I was a child. It was a gift from my mother, and I rode it every day after school. Because I rode so often in the afternoons, I sometimes got sunburned. Riding that bike helped me feel independent and confident.

제안: Make the answer slightly more natural and add a specific reason or example using linking words. Begin with a clear opinion, then support it with one or two concrete reasons and, if possible, a brief comparison or statistic. Use plural forms and articles correctly ("a bike" → "bikes").

예시: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country. Nowadays most people prefer motorcycles because they are more convenient and faster for commuting, especially in busy cities. For example, many commuters choose motorcycles to save time on their daily trips.

× Yes, I used to have a bike when I was child.

✓ Yes, I used to have a bike when I was a child.

Missing definite article 'a' before the singular noun 'child'. In English, when referring to being a child in general, use 'a child'. Suggestion: include 'a' with singular countable nouns (I was a child).

× This was a gift for my mother.

✓ This was a gift from my mother.

Preposition choice is incorrect for indicating giver. 'A gift for my mother' means the gift is intended for her; context implies the speaker received it, so 'from my mother' correctly indicates the giver. Suggestion: use 'from' to show who gave something.

× I like to writing it every day and it's make me sunburn sometime.

✓ I liked riding it every day and it sometimes made me sunburned.

Multiple issues: 'like to writing' mixes infinitive and -ing form—use 'like to ride' or 'liked riding'. Past habitual context ('used to') means past tense is appropriate. 'It's make' wrong verb form and tense; use past 'made'. 'sunburn' needs adjective/past participle 'sunburned' or phrase 'get sunburned'. Also 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'. Suggestion: match tense consistently (past) and use correct verb forms and adverb: 'I liked riding it every day and it sometimes made me sunburned.'

× I don't think so.

✓ I don't think so.

No grammatical change needed. Sentence correctly uses present simple to express current opinion. Keep as is.

× Nowadays people prefer to use a motorcycle instead of bike because it's more convenient and also faster.

✓ Nowadays people prefer to use a motorcycle instead of a bike because it's more convenient and also faster.

Missing article 'a' before 'bike'. When referring to a singular, countable noun in general comparison, include the indefinite article 'a'. Suggestion: add 'a' before 'bike'.

× Nowadays people prefer to use a motorcycle instead of a bike because it's more convenient and also faster.

✓ Nowadays people prefer to use a motorcycle instead of a bike because it's more convenient and also faster.

Contraction 'it's' correctly stands for 'it is' referring to 'a motorcycle' (singular). No change needed for third person singular here; verb 'is' matches. Keep as is.