Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response repeats the examiner's question instead of answering. For a better score, answer directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no), then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Keep the whole answer natural, concise (no more than 5 sentences), and use relevant vocabulary (e.g., model, ride, neighborhood, helped me).

예시: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. It was a small, red bicycle with training wheels, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood every afternoon. Because my parents lived near a park, I often practiced there, which helped me gain confidence and balance quickly.

제안: Again, you repeated the question instead of answering. To improve, start with a clear opinion (Yes/No/To some extent), then give specific reasons and one example. Use linking words like 'because', 'however' or 'for example' to make your answer coherent, and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially in cities with heavy traffic. For example, many people use bikes for short commutes because they are cheap and convenient, and some cities have dedicated bike lanes which encourage cycling. However, in rural areas cars remain the main transport option.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original student reply merely repeated the examiner's question, providing no answer. This is a sentence structure / communicative error (type 26). The corrected sentence uses past simple to answer a past-time question: 'had' is the past tense of 'have', and 'when I was a child' correctly specifies the time. Suggestion: listen to the question and answer directly using appropriate tense and a subject and verb (for example 'Yes, I had a bike' or 'No, I didn't have a bike').

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering it, which is a sentence structure/response error (type 26). The corrected sentence keeps the present simple tense appropriate for general opinions: 'I think' plus the clause 'bikes are popular in my country.' Suggestion: when asked for an opinion, start with a phrase such as 'Yes, I think...' or 'No, I don't think...' and then give a reason or example to expand the answer.