Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cần cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản (thì, động từ), phát biểu rõ ràng theo cấu trúc: câu chủ đề + chi tiết hỗ trợ, và dùng liên từ hợp lý. Tránh lỗi từ vựng (ví dụ "buy" sai chỗ, "have" thay vì "had"). Nên tách câu dài thành 2-3 câu ngắn dưới 5 câu tổng cộng, thêm chi tiết cụ thể (khi nào, bao nhiêu tuổi) và dùng các liên từ như "at first", "then", "because" để mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My dad bought it for me when I was eight, and at first I didn’t know how to ride it. Then my best friend and my father helped me practice every afternoon until I became confident.

제안: Cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (số ít/ số nhiều, thì), cấu trúc câu rõ ràng và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể, có dẫn chứng. Sử dụng liên từ để giải thích lý do (e.g. "because", "for example"). Tránh câu không rõ ràng như "I look at the right I can see" — thay bằng mô tả cụ thể về nơi hoặc tần suất nhìn thấy xe đạp.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many students use them to go to school. For example, when I ride to school in the morning I can see dozens of students on bicycles along the road, and many families also use bikes for short trips.

× Yes I have a bike when I wo work when I was a child my dad bought it for me.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child; my dad bought it for me.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with past context 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'had' to match the time frame. Also remove the garbled phrase 'when I wo work' and split into two clauses for clarity. Suggestion: use consistent past tense for events that happened in the past and separate ideas with punctuation.

× At first I don't know how to buy with my friends but everyone nearby my house like my best friend and my dad help me ride the bike.

✓ At first I didn't know how to ride with my friends, but everyone nearby my house, like my best friend and my dad, helped me ride the bike.

The clause refers to past events, so present tense 'don't know' and 'help' should be past 'didn't know' and 'helped'. 'Buy' is incorrect contextually and should be 'ride'. Add commas to set off the example phrase. Suggestion: use past tense for past situations and choose the correct verb ('ride' instead of 'buy').

× Yes, I also think that bike are popular in my country because when I go to school I look at the right I can see.

✓ Yes, I also think that bikes are popular in my country because when I go to school I can see them on the right.

The noun 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' to agree with plural verb context; use 'are' with plural subject. The original word order is confused; 'I can see them' clarifies the object. Suggestion: make subject and verb agree in number and use clear word order for sight descriptions.

× It's popular to see student in my country ride a bike to.

✓ It's common in my country to see students ride bikes as well.

Preposition and article use are incorrect: 'student' should be plural 'students', 'ride a bike to' is ungrammatical. Use 'in my country' placement and 'as well' or 'too' at the end. Suggestion: use plural nouns when speaking generally and choose correct prepositions and adverbs ('in my country', 'as well').