Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar (past tense consistency and articles), make the response more natural and concise, and add one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Aim for 2–4 sentences. For example, correct past-tense verbs (bought, used) and use a brief reason or memory linked with a connector like “because” or “so”.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I started riding it from the age of 12 because my father bought it for me so I could cycle to school. I used it almost every day, which helped me become more independent.

제안: Make sentences grammatically correct and more specific. Use plural nouns and appropriate verbs, add linking words (for example, “because” or “also”) and one concrete detail (who uses bikes, for what purposes). Keep answer to 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because people of all ages use them. For example, many children cycle to school while adults ride for short commutes or exercise, and bikes are often used for leisure on weekends.

× Since I was 12 I used to go to school with my bike and that's why my dad buy me some.

✓ Since I was 12 I used to go to school with my bike and that's why my dad bought me one.

The sentence mixes past habitual 'used to' with present-tense 'buy'. Use past tense 'bought' to match 'used to' and 'was'. Also 'some' is incorrect for a single bike; use 'one'. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for past events and use correct quantifier for countable singular nouns.

× Yes, bike is quite popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country.

The noun 'bike' refers generally to the category and should be plural 'bikes' when speaking about popularity in general. Also plural requires plural verb 'are'. Suggestion: use plural nouns with 'are' when making general statements about countable items.

× Every generation uses it.

✓ Every generation uses them.

The pronoun 'it' refers back to 'bikes' (plural). Using singular 'it' is incorrect; use plural pronoun 'them'. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents.

× Kids and adults get used to.

✓ Kids and adults are used to them.

The phrase 'get used to' is incomplete without an object or needs correct passive/continuous form. To express habituation to bikes, use 'are used to them' or 'get used to riding them'. Suggestion: include the object or use a complete verb phrase (e.g., 'get used to riding bikes').

× Drive the bike for school and just for fun.

✓ They ride bikes to school and just for fun.

Imperative-like fragment 'Drive the bike' is inappropriate here. Use third-person habitual 'they ride bikes' to describe what people do. Also 'to school' is a more natural prepositional phrase. Suggestion: use a complete sentence with correct subject and verb and prefer 'ride' for bicycles.