Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は直接的で理解しやすいですが、詳細や具体性が不足しています。また、文はやや単純で接続詞や時間表現を使って情報を整理するとより自然になります。改善点としては、練習の頻度や場所、感情（好きだったかどうか）や結果（例えばいつ一人で乗れるようになったか）などを加え、文を2〜3文に分けて接続語を用いることです。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I practiced with my dad almost every day in the park near our house, and after a few weeks I could ride without help. I really enjoyed those sessions because they made me feel independent.

제안: 意図は伝わりますが、文法（"use to bicycle" や断片的な文）と流暢さに問題があります。回答が断片的で情報が曖昧なので、具体的な状況や理由、頻度、比較などを加えて整った2〜3文にすることが重要です。接続語（for example, because, especially）を使って論理的に説明してください。

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in Japan. Many people use them for short trips to shops or commuting to school because they are convenient and cheap. For example, in my city lots of students and office workers cycle to the station every morning.

× Yes, I think so many Japanese people use to bicycle when they go outside.

✓ Yes, I think many Japanese people ride bicycles when they go out.

The original sentence incorrectly combines 'use to' with a noun and the verb 'bicycle' used as a verb is awkward. Use 'ride bicycles' or 'ride a bicycle'. Also 'go outside' is better as 'go out' in this context. Suggestion: replace 'use to bicycle' with 'ride bicycles' and remove 'so' before 'many'. Grammar problem type ID:11

× And go somewhere and, uh.

✓ They often go somewhere by bicycle.

This fragment lacks a subject and a finite verb, making it incomplete. It should be combined into a full sentence with subject and verb that matches the previous idea. Here 'They often go somewhere by bicycle' completes the thought and clarifies the mode of transport. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments; include subject and verb, and specify 'by bicycle' if needed. Grammar problem type ID:26