Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Говорите полными и грамматически корректными предложениями; используйте одно-два дополнительных предложения для пояснения. Исправьте грамматические ошибки (например, 'when I was a child') и добавьте подробность — почему не было велосипеда или чем вы тогда пользовались. Старайтесь не превышать 3–4 коротких предложений и избегайте повторов и пауз типа "umm".

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school with my friends because my family couldn't afford one. Occasionally we rented a bike at the park on weekends.

제안: Сформулируйте ответ прямо и логично, используйте связки для объяснения причины. Уберите звуковые паузы («umm») и повторения. Дайте конкретные примеры: какие виды транспорта популярны и почему (например, из-за инфраструктуры или климата). Максимум 3–4 предложения.

예시: No, bikes are not very popular in my country. Most people prefer scooters or cars because the roads are busy and there are few bike lanes. As a result, cycling is mainly for leisure rather than everyday commuting.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence is missing the verb 'was' needed to link the subject 'I' and the noun phrase 'a child'. This is a sentence structure/verb omission that affects meaning. Use 'was' because you are referring to a past state. Suggestion: include the past form of 'to be' ('was') after the subject when describing a past condition (e.g., 'when I was a child').

× No, bikes are not popular in my country. In my country is popular umm scooter or or car. I think that.

✓ No, bikes are not popular in my country. In my country, scooters or cars are popular, I think.

The original second sentence lacks a subject and has incorrect word order. English requires a subject before the verb: 'scooters or cars are popular'. Also use plural 'scooters' and 'cars' when speaking generally. Add a comma and move 'I think' to the end for natural phrasing. Suggestions: place the subject ('scooters or cars') before the verb ('are'), use plurals for general statements, and combine short clauses more naturally (e.g., 'In my country, scooters or cars are popular, I think.').