Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “Yes, I did”) then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Use past tense consistently and avoid repetition. Keep it under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I rode it every day after school. Because I was curious and liked outdoor activities, cycling helped me explore my neighborhood and make friends. It was one of my favorite childhood hobbies.

제안: Answer directly and use precise vocabulary. Begin with a clear opinion sentence (e.g., “Yes, they are very popular”), then give two specific reasons with linking words (because/for example). Use correct noun forms and smoother linking. Keep it concise and coherent.

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in Taiwan. For example, there are many public bike-sharing schemes and rental services, which make short trips and commuting convenient. Because these systems are affordable and well integrated with public transport, many people choose bikes for city travel.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was child because when I was pretty young I just always curious about everything and I want to try everything And of course basically the bike is the most people do and most people try when they when they were in a childhood. So I.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child because when I was very young I was always curious about everything and I wanted to try everything. And of course, riding a bike is something most people do when they are children.

Multiple tense and verb form errors: 'have' should be past tense 'had' to match 'when I was a child'. 'When I was child' needs the article 'a child'. 'Just always curious' should be 'was always curious' (past state). 'I want to try' should be 'I wanted to try' to keep past narrative consistent. 'Basically the bike is the most people do' is ungrammatical; correct to 'riding a bike is something most people do'. Also 'when they when they were in a childhood' is redundant and incorrect — use 'when they are children' (general truth) or 'when they were children' if referring to past; here general is fine. Suggestion: keep verb tenses consistent (use past tense for past experiences), include appropriate articles, and use clear noun phrases (e.g., 'riding a bike').

× Yeah, I was think so 'cause, you know, in Taiwan there are many bike you can rent and there are many, some schemes like show bike systems and people can use bicycle to travel in the city and it's really convenient though and so it's really popular in Taiwan.

✓ Yeah, I think so because, you know, in Taiwan there are many bikes you can rent and there are several schemes like shared bike systems, and people can use bicycles to travel in the city. It's really convenient, so bikes are very popular in Taiwan.

Tense and number errors: 'I was think so' is incorrect; use present 'I think so' to express current opinion. 'Many bike' should be plural 'many bikes'. 'Some schemes like show bike systems' is unclear and incorrect: use 'several schemes like shared bike systems'. 'People can use bicycle' needs plural 'bicycles' or 'use a bicycle'—here plural fits. Run-on sentence and redundancy fixed by splitting into clearer sentences. Suggestion: use correct verb forms for opinions (present), match noun plurality, and choose standard collocations like 'shared bike systems' or 'bike-sharing schemes'.