Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (umm), correct verb form (ride, not drive) and reduce repetition. Expand slightly with one or two specific supporting details (where or who taught you) using a linking word for coherence. Keep to a maximum of 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. I used to ride a bicycle around my neighborhood when I was a child. For example, my older brother taught me and I often rode to the park after school.

제안: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and fillers, use plural nouns correctly (bicycles), and give specific supporting details linked with connectors (for example, because, so). Mention who uses bikes and why to add content. Keep the answer concise (2–3 sentences).

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in the Philippines. For example, many students and commuters cycle to school or work because it is inexpensive and convenient in crowded areas.

× Yes, I did. When I I was a child I used to, umm, driving a bicycle.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was a child I used to ride a bicycle.

The phrase 'used to' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the -ing form. 'Used to driving' implies habitual ability or acclimatization, but to describe a past habitual action you should say 'used to ride'. Also remove the duplicated 'I' and filler words for clarity. Suggestion: Practice 'used to' + base verb (e.g., 'used to ride').

× Yes. I, I think, uh, bicycle is popular in the Philippines.

✓ Yes. I think bicycles are popular in the Philippines.

The singular noun 'bicycle' with no article is incorrect when making a general statement about many items. Use the plural 'bicycles' or 'the bicycle' with a different meaning. Also use 'are' to agree with the plural subject. Suggestion: For general statements about countable things, use the plural form (e.g., 'bicycles are popular').

× Many, many students are using that, uh, uh, whenever they are going to the school and also in the Philippines, many, there are many.

✓ Many students use them when they go to school, and in the Philippines there are many bicycles.

The original mixes tenses and pronouns incorrectly and uses 'the school' where 'school' as a place in general does not require 'the'. 'Are using' is acceptable but 'use' is simpler for habitual actions. 'That' is vague; use 'them' referring to bicycles. The clause 'there are many' needs a clear noun ('bicycles'). Also 'going to the school' should be 'go to school' for habitual actions. Suggestion: Keep consistent simple present for habitual facts and ensure pronouns and nouns clearly refer to the subject (e.g., 'Many students use them when they go to school').