Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be slightly more concise and correct minor grammar and word choice. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Fix the article use and a small word order issue (say "a bright pink bicycle" not "bright and pink").

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small, bright pink bicycle with training wheels. After school, I often rode it around the neighborhood with my friends, and this helped me gain confidence and improve my balance.

제안: Make the response more natural and fix grammar and word choice issues. Give a clear topic sentence, then add specific examples and use linking words (for example, "for example" or "also"). Correct pluralization and phrasing ("getting their home" → "going home", "using bicycle" → "using bicycles").

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country. For example, I often see students cycling home from school together, and many adults use bicycles for exercise or short trips to the market.

× It was small, bright and pink bicycle with training wheels.

✓ It was a small, bright pink bicycle with training wheels.

Missing article 'a' before singular countable noun 'bicycle' and unnecessary 'and' in adjective list. Use 'a' for one bicycle and list adjectives with commas (or commas and 'and' before final adjective). Also change 'bright and pink' to 'bright pink' if describing a single combined quality; otherwise use 'bright, pink'.

× I often see students with their friends cycling around the school getting their home, and I also see adults using bicycle for exercise and small trips.

✓ I often see students cycling around the school on their way home with their friends, and I also see adults using bicycles for exercise and short trips.

Several preposition and article issues: 'getting their home' is incorrect; use 'on their way home'. 'With their friends' should follow 'students' to be clear or placed after 'cycling'. 'Using bicycle' needs plural 'bicycles' or an article; context suggests plural. 'Small trips' is better as 'short trips'. Also adjust word order to improve clarity.