Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct, grammatically correct and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and word order are important. For example, begin with a clear topic sentence, then add when/how often and a brief detail about where you rode or who with. Keep it under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it almost every day to visit my friends and explore the neighborhood. Also, my parents taught me to cycle in the park, so I felt confident riding on busy streets later.

제안: Answer directly and stay on topic (bikes, not bags). Use linking words to give a reason and an example. Be specific about how common bikes are, who uses them and why (cost, convenience, weather). Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. For example, many students and workers use them for short commutes because they are cheap and convenient. However, they are less common in rural areas where distances are longer.

× Yes, when I was a child I usually go traveling with bike and I have also.

✓ Yes. When I was a child, I usually went traveling by bike, and I had one too.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. The context 'when I was a child' requires past tense verbs: 'go' should be 'went' and 'have' should be 'had'. Also 'traveling with bike' is unnatural; use the preposition 'by' with 'bike'. Adding commas and splitting into clearer clauses improves readability. Suggestion: keep verbs consistent in past tense and use 'by bike' for means of travel. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× In my country bags are very important to weather and it is a very common in my country.

✓ In my country, bikes are very common and important for the weather.

The original sentence has several issues: 'bags' seems to be a typo for 'bikes' given the topic; 'important to weather' is incorrect—use 'important for' or 'important because of' when referring to purpose or conditions; 'it is a very common' is ungrammatical—use 'very common' with no pronoun or use 'they are very common'. The correction fixes the noun, uses the correct preposition 'for', and ensures subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: choose correct nouns consistent with context, use 'important for' when indicating relevance to conditions, and ensure plural subjects match plural predicates. Grammar problem type ID: 11