Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify and simplify your response, correct grammar and word order, avoid filler words, and keep within 3–4 clear sentences. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific details (who bought it, why it was useful) using linking words such as "because" or "so". Watch subject-verb agreement (parents bought) and remove hesitations like "uh."

예시: Yes. My parents bought me a bicycle when I was a child so I could ride to school. It was a wonderful gift because it made my daily commute much faster and more enjoyable. I also learned to be more independent and active by cycling every day.

제안: Make your answer more coherent and specific: give a clear topic sentence, then add two concrete reasons with linking words (for example, "because" and "so"). Avoid repetition and unclear phrases (e.g. "accessing," "city box"). Mention where people cycle (streets, riverside paths) and why (convenient, healthy, affordable). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. You can see many people cycling on city streets and riverside paths because it is convenient, healthy and affordable. As a result, cycling is a common choice for short commutes and leisure rides.

× Yes, when I what I tried, my parent bought me a bike so I could ride to school.

✓ Yes, when I was young, my parents bought me a bike so I could ride to school.

The original sentence has extra words and incorrect verb form causing a sentence structure problem (Type ID 26). 'when I what I tried' is ungrammatical; likely meant 'when I was young' or 'when I tried'. Also 'parent' should be plural 'parents' for naturalness if referring to both; this relates to singular/plural but mainly the sentence structure prevents understanding. Suggestion: use a clear time clause 'when I was young' and ensure subject number matches intended meaning; use 'parents' if both parents bought it or 'my parent' only if one did.

× It was, uh, wonderful gift and very useful because it made my daily commute faster and more enjoyable.

✓ It was, uh, a wonderful gift and very useful because it made my daily commute faster and more enjoyable.

Missing indefinite article before a singular countable noun 'wonderful gift' is an article error (Type ID 22). English requires 'a' or 'the' before singular countable nouns when not using a determiner. Suggestion: add 'a' to form 'a wonderful gift'.

× Yes, cycling is very popular in my country.

✓ Yes, cycling is very popular in my country.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no change. It remains as is. No error matching the provided list.

× When you visit you can see many people commuting or accessing by riding bicycles, bicycles along Riverside past and in the city box because it's convenient and healthy and often.

✓ When you visit, you can see many people commuting by bicycle along the riverside and in the city center because it's convenient, healthy, and common.

Multiple issues here: confusing prepositions and word choices constitute incorrect use of prepositions and word forms (Type ID 11). 'commuting or accessing by riding bicycles' is redundant and unidiomatic; 'commuting by bicycle' or 'riding bicycles' is correct. 'along Riverside past and in the city box' is unclear; likely intended 'along the riverside and in the city center.' 'often' at the end is misplaced; 'common' or 'frequently' works better. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: simplify to 'commuting by bicycle along the riverside and in the city center' and use 'common' or 'frequently' instead of 'often' at the end.