Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Work on clarity, grammar, and conciseness. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct basic grammar (use past tense consistently and proper nouns), and finish your sentence. Use one or two supporting details connected with linking words. For example, replace hesitations and repeated words, use: “I used to have a bicycle when I was a child.” Then add a specific reason: “My mother bought it so I could get exercise and unwind after school.”

예시: I used to have a bicycle when I was a child. My mother bought it so I could get regular exercise and relax after school. As a result, I became more confident riding on busy streets and often cycled to visit friends.

제안: Answer the question directly and avoid confusion between place names. Use correct vocabulary and grammar (bicycle, bike, popular). Provide one clear reason and an example, linked with a connector. Keep it concise and avoid filler sounds. For instance, say: “Yes, bikes have been popular because they are affordable and handy for short trips,” then give a specific example such as markets or short commutes.

예시: Yes, bikes are popular in my country. In the past, many people rode bicycles to go to the local market or to visit nearby places because bikes are affordable and convenient. For example, my neighbor cycles to the market every morning to buy fresh vegetables.

× I I used to have a bison.

✓ I used to have a bicycle.

The sentence uses 'bison' which is a different word (an animal) and not a grammatical error type from the provided list. Although this is a lexical error, it does not match any listed grammar problem types, so no listed-type correction is applied. Suggested correction: replace 'bison' with 'bicycle' to match the intended meaning and the context of the question.

× My mom bought it for me because she want me to have an exercise and help me relax when I am stressed.

✓ My mom bought it for me because she wanted me to get some exercise and to help me relax when I was stressed.

Errors: 'want' should be in past tense and agree with third person singular (wanted) and 'have an exercise' is incorrect collocation; use 'get some exercise'. Also maintain past tense consistency with 'bought' and 'was stressed'. Grammar types matched: 2 (Third person singular issue) and 5 (Past tense issue). Suggestion: use 'wanted' for third person singular past, 'get some exercise' for natural phrasing, and match verb tenses consistently.

× Moreover, my mom think that riding a bike helped me to.

✓ Moreover, my mom thought that riding a bike would help me.

Errors: 'think' should be 'thought' to match past tense and third person singular; 'helped me to' is incomplete and awkward. Use 'would help me' to report a past belief about a general outcome. Grammar types matched: 2 (Third person singular issue) and 5 (Past tense issue). Suggestion: change 'think' to 'thought' and use 'would help me' for clarity.

× Personally, I believe that Dubai is quite popular in Thailand because, uh, in the past people used to have used to take a bite to go to the market or to travel around, and I think by is quite comfortable and convenient.

✓ Personally, I believe that bicycles are quite popular in Thailand because, in the past, people used to take a bike to go to the market or to travel around, and I think bikes are quite comfortable and convenient.

Multiple problems: 'Dubai' is a lexical mistake (wrong place name) not in list; 'have used to' is redundant and incorrect—use 'used to' for past habit; 'take a bite' and 'by' are incorrect words (lexical). Also missing plural agreement: 'bicycles' or 'bikes' with 'are'. Grammar types matched: 1 (Singular and plural issue) for plural form 'bicycles/bikes' and 6 (Present tense issue) for 'I think by is' which should be 'I think bikes are'. Also 5 (Past tense issue) for correct use of 'used to'. Suggestion: use 'bikes' or 'bicycles', keep 'used to take a bike', and ensure subject-verb agreement with 'bikes are'.