Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more accurate and fluent: correct grammar (tense, articles, word forms), reduce repetition, and organize into a clear topic sentence plus one or two supporting details using linking words. Keep to under five sentences and include specific details (color, who you rode with, what you learned).

예시: Yes, I did. When I was seven I had a small bright red bike with training wheels, and I used to ride it around the neighbourhood every afternoon with my friends. Learning to ride made me more confident and gave me a sense of freedom, which is why it remains one of my fondest childhood memories.

제안: Improve clarity and grammar: state your opinion directly, use correct subject-verb agreement, avoid filler words, and give specific reasons or examples with linking words. Keep it concise (1–3 sentences) and use relevant vocabulary (commute, affordable, crowded, public transport).

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because we have a large population and not everyone can afford a car. As a result, many people use bicycles for short commutes since they are cheap, convenient and often faster than crowded buses in urban areas.

× I have a small bright ride bike with training wheels when I was 7 years old and I used to to ride around the neighborhood with my friends every afternoon.

✓ I had a small bright red bike with training wheels when I was 7 years old, and I used to ride around the neighborhood with my friends every afternoon.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was 7 years old') so present perfect 'have' is incorrect; the simple past 'had' should be used. Also 'used to to ride' has a duplicated 'to' and 'ride' should follow 'used to' without 'to'. 'Ride' was misspelled/incorrectly described as 'ride bike' and color 'bright ride' seems intended as 'bright red'. Suggestion: use simple past for past events, drop the extra 'to', and correct word order and word choice.

× Learning to riding give me a lot of confidence and the freedom that and this is one of my fondest the childhood memories.

✓ Learning to ride gave me a lot of confidence and freedom, and this is one of my fondest childhood memories.

After 'learning to' the base verb 'ride' (not 'riding') should be used. The main clause refers to a past experience, so the past tense 'gave' is required instead of 'give'. 'The freedom that and' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'and freedom'. 'My fondest the childhood memories' has an extraneous 'the'—use 'my fondest childhood memories'. Suggestion: use the infinitive after 'learning to', match tense consistently to past, remove redundant words, and correct article placement.

× Oh yes, the I think that's really popular in my country cause our country have so many population they don't they not everyone have a cars, some transport.

✓ Oh yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because our country has a large population and not everyone has a car, so many people use bikes for transport.

'The I think' has an extra definite article 'the' that should be removed. 'That's really popular' needs a clear subject—'bicycles are' fits context. 'Cause' is informal; use 'because'. 'Our country have' is wrong for subject-verb agreement with singular subject 'country'—use 'has'. 'So many population' is incorrect phrasing; use 'a large population'. 'They don't they not everyone have a cars' is ungrammatical; correctly express as 'not everyone has a car'. 'Some transport' is vague; clarify as 'use bikes for transport.' Suggestions: remove unnecessary articles, correct subject-verb agreement, use clearer noun phrases, and avoid informal contractions in formal responses.

× So bike is a really convenient transport in our country and we have a really many, many public.

✓ So bikes are a very convenient means of transport in our country, and we have many public bike lanes.

'Bike' should be plural ('bikes') when speaking generally. 'Is' should change to 'are' to agree with the plural noun. 'A really convenient transport' is awkward; use 'a convenient means of transport' or 'convenient transport'. 'We have a really many, many public' is ungrammatical: 'many' should modify a plural noun (e.g., 'many public bike lanes' or 'many public bike-sharing stations'). Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements, ensure subject-verb agreement, and include the noun that 'many' quantifies.