Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct tense and collocations (e.g., "when I was young", "on foot"). Avoid unnecessary words and keep responses under five sentences.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was young. I usually walked everywhere because I enjoyed exploring the streets near my home, and walking helped me notice small shops and parks I might have missed by bike.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence, then include one specific reason and an example. Use plural/singular agreement and precise vocabulary (e.g., "ride-hailing apps", "commuting"). Keep it concise and coherent with linking words like "because" or "for example".

예시: Yes, bikes are increasingly popular in my country because many people use them for commuting and delivery work. For example, the rise of ride-hailing and food-delivery apps has led to more people riding motorbikes and bicycles in cities.

× No, I didn't have any bikes in my young age.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike in my childhood.

The phrase uses plural 'bikes' and awkward noun phrase 'my young age'. Context asks about having a single bike; use singular 'a bike' for countable nouns when referring to possession generally. Also 'in my young age' is non-idiomatic; use 'in my childhood' or 'when I was a child'. Suggestion: Use 'a bike' for singular possession and replace 'in my young age' with 'in my childhood' or 'when I was a child.'

× I prefer to go anywhere on my foot and it gives a huge chance for me to explore the beauty and neighborhood surrounding my residence.

✓ I prefer to go anywhere on foot because it gives me a great chance to explore the beauty and the neighborhood around my home.

Several issues: 'on my foot' is incorrect—use the idiom 'on foot' (11: preposition and 13: adjective/adverb). 'Gives a huge chance for me' is awkward; more natural is 'gives me a great chance' which corrects word choice (13) and word order (20). 'Neighborhood surrounding my residence' is wordy; use 'the neighborhood around my home.' Suggestions: use idiomatic expressions ('on foot'), simplify phrases ('gives me a great chance'), and prefer 'home' or 'house' for natural speech.

× Definitely, bikes are becoming more popular nowadays as it is used for various apps and for professional and personal uses.

✓ Definitely, bikes are becoming more popular nowadays because they are used for various apps and for professional and personal purposes.

Subject-verb agreement and pronoun reference: 'bikes' is plural, so later reference should be 'they' not 'it' (27: subject-verb agreement/pronoun use). Also 'uses' is better as 'purposes' for collocation. Suggestion: match pronouns to antecedents ('they') and use 'because' for reason; replace 'uses' with 'purposes.'

× Previously it had a minimal use, but now it has increased in a number.

✓ Previously it had minimal use, but now its use has increased significantly.

Awkward phrasing and article problems: 'a minimal use' is unnatural—use 'minimal use' without 'a' (22/17: article errors). 'It' ambiguously refers to 'bikes' but should be 'their' or rephrase to 'its use' if referring to 'use' as a concept (12: pronoun use). 'Increased in a number' is incorrect; use 'increased significantly' or 'in number' with clearer structure. Suggestion: say 'their use has increased significantly' or 'its use has increased significantly' and avoid 'in a number.'