Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clear and use correct tense and concise structure. Start with a direct topic sentence in the past tense, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and maintain natural phrasing.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I rode it to visit my grandparents every weekend. Because the neighborhood was quiet, I learned to ride safely and gained a lot of confidence.

제안: Answer directly, use correct subject-verb agreement and singular/plural forms, and give specific reasons or examples with linking words. Use vocabulary relevant to popularity (common, widespread, used for commuting, recreation).

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and errands. For example, in cities you can see countless bicycles parked near markets, and cycling clubs are also common among young people.

× Yes, I had when I'm I'm a child.

✓ Yes, I had one when I was a child.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses and has repetition. The question asks about the past ('Did you have'), so use past tense 'was' not 'I'm'. Also 'had' needs an object: 'had one' (a bike). Remove the duplicated 'I'm'. Suggestion: use 'I had one when I was a child.' Grammar problem type ID:6

× Yes, I think that's popular in my countries because there are many buys in the streets.

✓ Yes, I think they're popular in my country because there are many bikes in the streets.

Errors: 'countries' should be singular 'country' to match meaning; 'that's' (that is) is incorrect for plural 'bikes'—use 'they're' (they are). 'buys' is a misspelling of 'bikes'. Use 'bikes' and plural pronoun/agreement 'they're'. Also 'in the streets' is acceptable, but 'on the streets' or 'in the streets' both work; 'on the streets' is more natural. Suggested corrected sentence: 'Yes, I think they're popular in my country because there are many bikes on the streets.' Grammar problem type ID:1