Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a full, natural response with a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Avoid single-word answers and hesitations. Mention what kind of bike, when you got it, who gave it to you, or a brief memory to make the answer specific and coherent. Use a linking phrase if adding details.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood every afternoon. I remember learning to balance with training wheels at first, and then feeling proud the day I rode it without help.

제안: Provide a direct opinion followed by specific reasons and examples. Use linking words (for example, because, moreover) to connect your points. Mention who uses bikes, for what purposes (commuting, exercise), or any cultural or infrastructural reasons to support your view.

예시: Yes, they are very popular because many people use bicycles for commuting and exercise. For example, in cities there are dedicated bike lanes and affordable bike-sharing schemes, so students and office workers often cycle to save time and money.

× Uh, yes.

✓ Yes, I did.

The response 'Uh, yes.' is informal and incomplete for the question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' The question is in the past simple and expects a past-simple answer. A full grammatical reply should be 'Yes, I did.' This uses the auxiliary did to avoid repeating the verb 'have'. Suggestion: answer with a complete clause matching the tense of the question, e.g., 'Yes, I did.' or 'Yes, I had a bike.'

× Absolutely yes.

✓ Absolutely, yes.

The reply 'Absolutely yes.' is understandable but slightly awkward. For clarity and naturalness, a short affirmative response should be punctuated or reordered: 'Absolutely, yes.' or better 'Absolutely.' or 'Yes, absolutely.' Additionally, the question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' is in the present simple asking for opinion, so answers like 'Yes, absolutely.' or 'Yes, they are.' are more natural. Suggestion: use 'Yes, absolutely.' or 'Yes, they are.' to match register and grammar.