Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Expand your answer with a short topic sentence and a brief reason or detail. Use 1–3 supporting sentences and a linking word if needed. For example, say whether you wanted one, how often you used one, or why you didn’t have one to make the reply more natural and informative.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I grew up in a small apartment building, so my parents preferred that I play in nearby parks instead of riding a bike. As a result, I learned to enjoy walking and playing with friends rather than cycling.

제안: Give a clearer topic sentence and support it with specific reasons and examples. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore, however) and avoid vague phrasing like “other people.” Mention who rides bikes (students, commuters), where they ride, and one reason why to make the answer more precise and natural.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many students and office workers cycle to school and work because it is cheap and convenient. In addition, cities have added bike lanes recently, so more people feel safe riding regularly.

× Yes, it's popular because other people just like to go to school.

✓ Yes, they're popular because many people like to go to school.

The student refers to 'bikes' (plural), so the pronoun and verb must agree in number. 'It's popular' uses singular 'it' and 'is', which is incorrect for the plural noun 'bikes'; use 'they're popular' or 'they are popular'. Also 'other people just like to go to school' is awkward and slightly off-topic; 'many people like to go to school' is clearer. Suggestion: match pronouns and verbs to the noun number (plural bikes → they + are) and use clearer quantifiers ('many' instead of 'other').