Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly with a correct grammatical sentence, give one or two brief supporting details, and keep it natural. Use past tense for childhood and avoid redundancy. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add a reason or memory using linking words such as "because" or "so."

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one. However, I often borrowed my neighbor's bike to ride to the park, which I enjoyed a lot.

제안: Begin with a direct, grammatically correct statement, then add specific supporting details. Use appropriate verb agreement and clearer phrasing. Include linking words like "because" or "for example," and give a brief reason or example to make your answer more informative and natural.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people cycle to work or school in the morning to avoid traffic and save money.

× No, I have a no bike when I am child.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child.

Multiple issues: wrong verb tense and form, incorrect article, and incorrect pronoun. According to the list, article errors (ID 22) apply because 'a no bike' is not a correct article + noun combination; use 'a bike' with a negation. Also subject-verb tense should match past (see ID 5 Past tense issue). Correct sentence uses past simple negative 'did not have' and past 'was' for 'when I was a child'. Suggestion: use 'did not have' for past negative and include the article 'a' before countable singular noun 'bike'. Specific improvements: use 'did not have' for past negative statements, use 'a' before singular countable nouns, and use 'was' for 'I' in past reference.

× Yes, it goes without saying because everyone need a bike for go hour works.

✓ Yes, it goes without saying because everyone needs a bike to go to work.

Errors include subject-verb agreement and incorrect verb forms. Based on the list, present tense issue (ID 6) and third person singular issue (ID 2) apply because 'everyone need' should be 'everyone needs' (third-person singular agreement). Also preposition and verb form mistakes: 'for go hour works' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'to go to work'. Suggestions: use 'needs' with 'everyone', use the infinitive 'to go', and use 'to work' for the destination/ purpose. Ensure present simple for general truths: 'everyone needs a bike to go to work'.