Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer grammatically correct, concise, and add one supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then give a brief reason or description using a linking word. Keep to 2–3 sentences and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small, well-balanced toy bike my parents gave me, and I used it every day to ride around the neighborhood.

제안: Keep the response natural and add one specific example or short comparison to support your point. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and vary vocabulary slightly (e.g., motorcycles, affordable, convenient). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient in heavy traffic. For example, many commuters choose motorcycles and scooters since they are cheaper to buy and easier to park than cars.

× Yes, I do have a bike in my childhood it was gifted by my parents it and it was a toy bike and was well balanced.

✓ I had a bike in my childhood; it was gifted by my parents. It was a toy bike and was well balanced.

The sentence mixes present tense 'do have' with past context 'in my childhood' and lacks proper sentence boundaries. Use past tense 'had' for a past situation (Grammar Problem Type ID 6). Also split into two sentences or use punctuation to clarify ideas. Suggestion: use 'I had' for past ownership and separate clauses with a period or semicolon to avoid run-on sentences.

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country as they are easy to manage in heavy traffic and are easily available to buy because of their cheap prices.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because they are easy to use in heavy traffic and are inexpensive and widely available.

The original sentence is wordy and uses awkward phrasing ('easy to manage in heavy traffic', 'easily available to buy because of their cheap prices') and unnecessary conjunctions leading to poor sentence structure (Grammar Problem Type IDs 16 and 26). Replace 'manage' with 'use', combine ideas more concisely, and use 'inexpensive' or 'cheap' correctly. Also avoid 'available to buy' which is redundant; use 'widely available'.