Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Pronunciation and grammar need correction; give a direct topic sentence, use correct vocabulary (bikes, not bags), and add one or two specific reasons with linking words. Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences). For example, start with a clear sentence stating whether bikes are popular, then add supporting details (infrastructure, culture) using connectors like 'because' or 'however.'

예시: Bikes are not very popular in my country. This is mainly because we lack dedicated bike lanes and safe sidewalks, so riding can be dangerous. In addition, most people prefer cars for long distances and convenience, especially when the weather is bad. However, I think cycling could become more common if cities improved their infrastructure.

× Bags isn't that popular in our country because we don't have like the line to it or a sidewalk for it.

✓ Bikes aren't that popular in our country because we don't have bike lanes or sidewalks for them.

The original sentence wrongly used 'Bags' instead of 'Bikes' (word choice) and then 'isn't' which mismatches the plural subject. This is a subject-verb agreement and singular/plural issue (use plural verb for plural noun). Also 'the line to it' is unclear; the correct term is 'bike lanes'. Use 'sidewalks' plural to match general statement and 'for them' as a clear pronoun referring to bikes. Suggestion: ensure the noun is correct, match verb number to the subject (plural subject takes plural verb), and use standard collocations like 'bike lanes'.

× We always like we're known for using cars.

✓ We are generally known for using cars.

The original contains colloquial filler 'like' and an awkward structure 'We always like we're known for', which is a sentence structure error. Replace with 'We are generally known for using cars' to convey the intended meaning clearly and grammatically. Suggestion: remove unnecessary fillers ('like') and simplify the clause to a clear subject + linking verb + complement structure; use adverb 'generally' or 'usually' to express frequency instead of 'always' if meant as general tendency.