Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be grammatically correct and more concise. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one brief supporting detail. Use linking words if adding details. For example, correct tense: “I had a bike when I was a child.” Then add a short detail about how you used it.

예시: I had a bike when I was a child. I used it to ride to my friend’s house every afternoon, and it helped me feel independent.

제안: Make the answer more natural and coherent. Begin with a clear statement, then add a specific reason or example using linking words (for example, “because,” “for instance,” or “so”). Avoid repetition and fix word order and articles.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient. For instance, many students ride bicycles to school, and families often cycle together on weekends.

× Uh, yes, I do have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Uh, yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'do have' with a past time reference 'when I was a child'. Use the past simple 'had' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent with time expressions (use past simple for past events).

× So in my country will always like especially students use bike to go to school or do their weekend activities.

✓ In my country, bikes are always popular; students especially use them to go to school or for weekend activities.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing auxiliary/subject, and uses 'will' incorrectly. Recast into a clear subject-verb structure: 'bikes are always popular' (present simple to describe a general fact). Use 'students especially use them' to refer back to 'bikes', and 'for weekend activities' is the correct prepositional phrase. Suggestions: Place the subject before the verb, use appropriate pronoun reference ('them' for bikes), and use present simple for general facts.