Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the examiner's question directly and keep it natural. The student misheard and repeated a different word. Begin with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief detail), then add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Keep it within 1–5 sentences and avoid repeating the examiner's question.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bicycle with training wheels, and I learned to ride it in my neighborhood park. Because it was light and easy to handle, I gained confidence quickly and started riding alone by age seven.

제안: Improve grammar, vocabulary and completeness. Start with a clear opinion sentence, then give specific reasons and finish the sentence. Use linking words (because, therefore, for example) and correct nouns/plurals. Avoid vague words like “vibe” and unfinished clauses.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in the Philippines because many people use them for daily transportation. For example, commuters and delivery workers often ride motorcycles and bicycles to avoid traffic, and bicycles are also affordable and easy to park in crowded cities.

× Did you have a bag when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student repeated the examiner's question but changed 'bike' to 'bag', which is a lexical error rather than grammar; however it involves incorrect pronoun/word choice relative to the context. Correction restores the intended noun to match the examiner's question. Suggestion: Listen carefully to the examiner's question and repeat key words to ensure you respond to the same topic.

× Yes vibe is popular in my country as most of the Philippine use it for transportation and for.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because most people in the Philippines use them for transportation.

Multiple errors: incorrect noun 'vibe' (word choice), missing comma after 'Yes', incorrect singular/plural and article use ('the Philippine' is wrong), and an incomplete sentence ending with 'and for'. The corrected sentence fixes subject-verb agreement ('bikes are'), uses 'people in the Philippines' for natural phrasing, uses 'use them' to agree in number with 'bikes', and removes the trailing 'and for'. Suggestions: 1) Use the correct noun ('bikes'). 2) Ensure subject and verb agree in number. 3) Use 'the Philippines' for the country name and include 'people' when referring to residents. 4) Complete the thought; avoid leaving sentences unfinished.