Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is concise and directly answers the question, which is good. To improve, add one brief supporting detail (a reason or short fact) using a linking word to make the response more natural and informative. Keep it to one additional sentence and avoid hesitations.

예시: No, I didn't because my family lived in a city where public transport was more convenient, so we never needed a bicycle.

제안: The answer has useful ideas but many problems with vocabulary, grammar and clarity. To improve: (1) use the correct topic word (bikes, not 'tiles'); (2) start with a clear topic sentence; (3) use linking words (for example, because, and) to connect points; (4) correct grammar (e.g., 'they are more convenient on the road' and 'they help prevent pollution'). Keep it to two or three short sentences without fillers like 'umm'.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are becoming more popular in my country because they are convenient for short trips and they help reduce air pollution. Also, many cities are building bike lanes, which makes cycling safer and more attractive.

× Worse, I think the tiles are popular in my country because it's more easy the road and umm umm also prevent the pollution and it's good for the environment.

✓ Actually, I think bikes are popular in my country because they make traveling on roads easier, help prevent pollution, and are good for the environment.

Several problems: 1) Incorrect word choice: 'Worse' is inappropriate here; use transition words like 'Actually' or 'However'. (Related to Grammar Problem Type 26: Sentence structure errors). 2) Wrong noun: 'tiles' should be 'bikes' (vocabulary error leading to sentence meaning error; treated under sentence structure errors). 3) Incorrect use of 'it's' with plural subject and awkward structure: replace with plural pronoun 'they' and restructure ('they make traveling on roads easier') (Grammar Problem Type 27: Subject-verb agreement and Type 1: Singular and plural issue). 4) Word order and comparative form: 'more easy the road' is ungrammatical; correct to 'make traveling on roads easier' (Grammar Problem Type 26 and 6: Present tense issue for appropriate continuous/general statement). 5) Missing verb form and subject in 'also prevent the pollution': add subject and correct form 'help prevent pollution' (Grammar Problem Type 8: Verb + -ing form not required here but main issue is missing subject and parallel verb form; falls under Type 26 sentence structure and Type 27 subject-verb agreement). 6) Redundancy 'the pollution' -> 'pollution' (Grammar Problem Type 22: Article errors). Suggestion: use clear subject 'they' for plural 'bikes', maintain parallel structure in list of reasons (use verbs with same form), choose correct linking words, and avoid filler sounds like 'umm'.