Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two brief supporting details. Use correct tense and simple linking words. Avoid filler words (uh) and contradictions (bike vs bicycle).

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually rode a small bicycle that belonged to my neighbor because my family couldn't afford one. As a result, I learned to be careful and patient when riding.

제안: Start with a clear opinion sentence, then give specific reasons and one example. Use linking words (because, when, although) and correct singular/plural and word order. Keep it concise (max 4–5 sentences).

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to work or to go to nearby shops. However, for long distances people usually prefer cars because they are faster and more comfortable.

× Let me thinking not I don't have a bike when I was a child, as when I was a child I usually prefer, uh, bicycle, not a bike.

✓ I don't think I had a bike when I was a child; I usually preferred bicycles.

Multiple structural errors: incorrect verb forms and word order. 'Let me thinking' is ungrammatical (26). The clause 'I don't have a bike when I was a child' mixes present and past tenses; use past 'I didn't have' or better 'I don't think I had' to express uncertainty (5,6). 'I usually prefer, uh, bicycle, not a bike' has wrong tense and article/word choice; use past 'preferred' and plural 'bicycles' (5,22). Suggestion: choose consistent past tense, use subject-verb-object order, and use plural for general reference to bicycles.

× As in my countries bikes are popular popular as many of the people or folks prefer bikes to go on local places as if they want to go on far places they prefer the cars but usually they prefer more to the bikes as they are giving.

✓ In my country, bikes are very popular because many people prefer them for short trips; for longer trips they prefer cars, but generally people prefer bikes.

Errors include incorrect noun form 'countries' should be singular to match 'my' (1), repetition 'popular popular' (26), awkward prepositions 'go on local places' and 'go on far places' (11), incorrect article 'the cars' and 'the bikes' where no article is needed (17,22), and word order problems 'prefer more to the bikes as they are giving' (26). Also tense and agreement mostly present but need clarity (6,27). Suggestion: use 'in my country', use 'bikes are popular', use 'for short trips' and 'for longer trips', avoid unnecessary articles before general plural nouns, and simplify sentence structure into clauses joined by clear conjunctions.