Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, fluency and avoid hesitations. Use past tense consistently, remove filler words, and keep it concise with one clear topic sentence plus one supporting detail. Add a linking phrase for coherence.

예시: Yes, I did. I used to cycle around my neighborhood almost every day when I was a child, especially in the afternoons after school. This helped me make friends and become more confident on the road.

제안: Correct subject–verb agreement and reduce repetition. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give a clear contrast using a linking word (e.g., "however" or "but") and a specific reason or example.

예시: It depends. Generally, adults rarely use bikes for commuting because public transport and cars are more convenient; however, many children still enjoy riding bikes for fun and exercise in parks and neighborhoods.

× Yes I do. When I when I was a child I used to cycling around my neighborhood, uh, with my bike.

✓ Yes I did. When I was a child I used to cycle around my neighborhood with my bike.

The sentence mixes present and past tense. The response to 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' should use past tense 'Yes I did.' Also 'used to' is followed by the base form of the verb, so 'used to cycle' is correct rather than 'used to cycling'. Remove the duplicated 'when I' and the filler 'uh' for clarity. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense and use base verb after 'used to'.

× Well, it depends. People in my country normally doesn't really use bike for commute for commute, but children in my country likes to ride bike.

✓ Well, it depends. People in my country normally don't really use bikes for commuting, but children in my country like to ride bikes.

There are several agreement and form errors. 'People' is plural so the verb should be 'don't' not 'doesn't'. 'Use bike' should be pluralized to 'use bikes' (singular and plural issue) and the activity 'for commute' should be 'for commuting' (gerund after preposition). The repetition 'for commute for commute' must be removed. 'Children' is plural, so the verb should be 'like' not 'likes'. Also 'ride bike' should be 'ride bikes' or 'ride a bike'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement with plural subjects and use correct gerund or noun forms for activities.