Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a fuller, natural response with a topic sentence and brief supporting details (one or two sentences). Mention when you had the bike, who it belonged to, or a short memory to make it specific. Keep answers concise (no more than 5 sentences) and use linking words if adding details.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle from the age of six, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend with my older brother.

제안: Provide a clearer, grammatically correct opinion with specific reasons and a linking phrase. Start with a topic sentence stating your view, then give one or two specific reasons or examples (e.g., convenience, traffic, culture). Use correct phrasing and linking words like "because" or "because of".

예시: Not really. Motorcycles are more popular in my country because they are faster for commuting in heavy traffic and more practical for longer distances, whereas bicycles are mostly used for leisure or short trips.

× No, the popular in our country is motorcycle instead of bike.

✓ No, motorcycles are more popular in my country than bicycles.

This sentence has multiple issues: article use and noun form ('the popular' is incorrect) and subject-verb agreement/word choice. The correct comparative structure is 'X are more popular than Y.' Use plural nouns for general statements ('motorcycles', 'bicycles') and 'in my country' is the natural phrasing. Suggestion: use 'motorcycles are more popular in my country than bicycles' to convey the intended meaning.