Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, tense consistency and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense (e.g. “Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child.”). Give one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, “I used it to…” or “I often rode it to…”). Avoid irrelevant or unclear phrases like “walking the industrial St.” — replace with a clear description of where you rode it.

예시: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood and along the main street near my school, because it was faster than walking. Also, I remember fixing a flat tyre once with my father, which made me feel proud.

제안: Make the answer more coherent and precise. Begin with a clear opinion (e.g. “Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.”). Use linking words (for example, “because” and “for example”) and give specific reasons and brief examples: convenience for short trips, low cost, and health or environmental benefits. Correct comparative phrasing (use “compared to other means of transport”). Keep the response to 2–4 short sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are convenient for short trips and much cheaper than cars. For example, many people cycle to local shops or to work nearby, and cycling also helps reduce traffic and pollution.

× Yes, I have a bicycle when I was a child and I remember I always walking the industrial St.

✓ Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child, and I remember I always walked along Industrial Street.

The sentence mixes present perfect ('have') with a past time phrase ('when I was a child'), which is incorrect. Use simple past 'had' to match the past context. 'I always walking' is missing the past tense auxiliary or verb form; use 'I always walked'. Also use a preposition for streets: 'walked along Industrial Street'. Ensure capitalization and standard street name form. Suggestion: keep verbs consistent in past tense and use correct verb forms and prepositions.

× Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because there are so many things are doing in doing in the near near areas and I think bicycle is more convenient.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many activities take place in nearby areas, and I think the bicycle is more convenient.

The original sentence has redundant and ungrammatical phrases: 'there are so many things are doing in doing in the near near areas' is incorrect structure and repetition. Replace with 'many activities take place in nearby areas' to express the idea clearly. Also add the definite article 'the' before 'bicycle' to refer specifically to bicycles in general. Keep verb tense present simple for general statements.

× Bikes are more convenient as comparison to other tools.

✓ Bikes are more convenient compared to other modes of transport.

The phrase 'as comparison to' is ungrammatical. Use 'compared to' or 'in comparison with'. Also 'other tools' is inappropriate for vehicles; use 'other modes of transport'. Ensure comparative structure is correct: 'more convenient compared to...'.