Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be grammatically accurate, give a clear topic sentence and a brief supporting detail. Use past tense for past events and avoid filler words. Keep it natural and concise (1–3 sentences).

예시: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle that I used to ride to my friend’s house every afternoon.

제안: Answer directly, then give a specific reason with clear linking words. Use correct subject-verb agreement, plural forms, and fewer hesitations. Limit to 2–3 clear sentences and include an example or brief detail (e.g., who rides them, where).

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in China because many young people use them for short commutes. For example, students and office workers often ride shared bikes on urban roads and bike lanes to avoid traffic.

× Yeah, of course, when I was a child, I have a bike.

✓ Yeah, of course, when I was a child, I had a bike.

The sentence mixes past time marker 'when I was a child' with present tense verb 'have'. Use past tense 'had' to match the past context. Suggestion: replace 'have' with 'had' to maintain consistent past narration.

× Yeah, I think bike uh, is so popular in China, umm, because I because so many younger, so many the younger ride the bike on the road ways was in with them.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are very popular in China because many young people ride bikes on the roads.

Multiple issues: singular 'bike' with generic meaning should be plural 'bikes'; verb 'is' must agree with plural subject 'bikes' (use 'are'); 'so many younger, so many the younger' is ungrammatical—use 'many young people' or 'many young people'; 'ride the bike' should be 'ride bikes' or 'ride them'; 'road ways was in with them' is incorrect word order and tense—use 'on the roads'. Suggestions: use plural nouns for general statements, ensure subject-verb agreement, and simplify phrase to 'many young people ride bikes on the roads.'