Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Content and structure are generally clear, but the answer has minor errors and redundancy. Improve by making a concise topic sentence, correcting small mistakes, and adding one specific detail (e.g., age or what you enjoyed doing with the bike). Use a linking phrase to connect the gift and the teaching. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My grandfather gave one to each of us, and he taught me to ride it when I was about seven, which made me confident to cycle around the neighborhood.

제안: Good content with relevant reasons, but the answer is a bit wordy and has some informal phrasing. Make the topic sentence direct, then give two specific, linked reasons (commuting and deliveries) using clear linking words (for example, "because" or "also"). Avoid filler phrases like "we have like this" and keep sentences concise (2–3 total).

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in the Philippines because many commuters use them to travel to work. Also, delivery services often rely on bicycles, which makes them a practical and affordable option for short trips.

× He gifted each one of us a by a bike and he taught us how to ride 1.

✓ He gifted each one of us a bike and he taught us how to ride.

The sentence contains an extra word 'by' and an extraneous '1'. Remove 'by' and '1' to make the past participle usage correct; 'gifted' is the past tense/past participle used correctly here. Also ensure word order is 'a bike' not 'a by a bike'. Suggestion: Proofread to remove accidental keystrokes and check article+noun order.

× ...since a lot of commuters use bike as a mode of transportation when they go to work and we have like this food service here and some of the riders use bicycle as their mode of delivery.

✓ ...since a lot of commuters use bikes as a mode of transportation when they go to work and we have this food service here where some of the riders use bicycles as their mode of delivery.

Plural nouns should agree with 'a lot of' and generic 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' when speaking generally, and the preposition/connector was unclear. Use 'as' with plural 'bikes' and change 'use bicycle' to 'use bicycles'. Also replace 'and we have like this food service here and some of the riders use' with 'where some of the riders use' for clearer prepositional relation. Suggestion: Use plural nouns for general statements and choose appropriate relative words like 'where' to connect clauses.

× Yes, I do believe bicycles are very popular here in the Philippines since a lot of commuters use bike as a mode of transportation when they go to work

✓ Yes, I do believe bicycles are very popular here in the Philippines since a lot of commuters use bikes as a mode of transportation when they go to work

The noun 'bike' should be plural ('bikes') because 'a lot of commuters' refers to many people using bikes generally. Using singular 'bike' after 'use' is incorrect here. Suggestion: When describing general habits of many people, use plural nouns (bikes).