Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Keep your answer direct, grammatical and provide one brief reason or detail. Use correct tense and simple linking words. For example, say you didn’t have a bike, give a short reason and one small detail about how you got around. Avoid unclear phrases like “come over a bike.”

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents couldn’t afford one. Instead, I usually walked to school or took the bus with my friends.

제안: Answer directly and use correct countable/uncountable forms and linking words. Give a clear opinion and a specific reason or example. Replace vague words like “quietly” and correct grammar (e.g., “a few people use bikes” or “many people use bikes”).

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, in cities you often see people riding bicycles to work or to the market because it is cheap and convenient.

× To be honest I hadn't cause my mom and dad come over a bike so.

✓ To be honest, I didn't have one because my mom and dad couldn't afford a bike.

The original sentence mixes incorrect past perfect 'hadn't' and nonstandard 'cause' for 'because', and uses present 'come' incorrectly. The question asks about possession in childhood, so simple past is appropriate: 'I didn't have one.' Use 'because' to introduce the reason, and 'couldn't afford' or 'didn't have money for' correctly expresses inability in the past. Also add a comma after the introductory phrase 'To be honest.' Suggestions: use simple past for past states ('didn't have'), use 'because' for reasons, and use past tense verbs ('couldn't afford').

× Yeah, quietly bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Yeah, actually bikes are quite popular in my country.

The word 'quietly' is incorrect here; the speaker likely meant 'actually' or 'quite.' The sentence describes a general present fact, so present simple 'are popular' is correct. 'Quite' should precede the adjective 'popular' ('quite popular'). Use 'actually' to correct casual speech: 'Yeah, actually...'. Suggestions: choose the correct adverb ('actually' or 'quite') and place it before the adjective, and keep present simple for general truths.

× There is a few that uses the bikes so.

✓ There are a few people who use bikes there.

'There is' should be 'There are' because 'a few' refers to plural. 'That' is incorrect when referring to people; use 'who.' 'Uses' must agree with the plural subject 'people' so use 'use.' The phrase 'the bikes' is unnatural here; 'bikes' or 'use bikes' is better. Also 'so' at the end is unnecessary; 'there' or 'in my country' can finish the sentence. Suggestions: match 'there is/there are' to singular/plural, use 'who' for people, and ensure verb agrees with plural subjects.