Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be grammatically correct, concise, and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “Yes, I did.”), then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct verb tenses and word order, avoid redundancy, and keep it within 1–3 sentences. For example, use past tense (“I had” or “I was given”) and natural phrasing (“my father gave me a bike for my birthday”).

예시: Yes, I did. My father gave me a bright red bicycle for my tenth birthday, and I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood every day.

제안: Answer directly, then support with specific reasons or examples. Use correct grammar and avoid repetition of phrases. Use linking words (e.g., “because,” “for example,” “so”) to make your answer coherent. Keep sentences short and clear and use appropriate vocabulary like “commonly,” “widely used,” or “popular.”

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use motorcycles or scooters to commute to work and run errands in crowded cities.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child and my father was gifted me on my birthday that bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and my father gave me that bike for my birthday.

This sentence mixes present tense 'have' with past time reference 'when I was a child' and uses an incorrect passive construction 'was gifted me'. Use past simple for completed past actions: 'had' and 'gave me'. Also change word order to 'gave me that bike for my birthday' for natural English.

× Indeed, bikes are very popular in my country and the bikes are give have a high demand in my country.

✓ Indeed, bikes are very popular in my country and they are in high demand.

The original sentence contains incorrect verb forms 'give have' and redundant noun phrase 'the bikes ... in my country'. Use the present simple passive 'are in high demand' and replace the repeated noun with pronoun 'they' to avoid redundancy.

× Mostly people are travelled from here to there by bikes.

✓ Most people travel from place to place by bike.

The phrase uses incorrect passive/progressive form 'are travelled' and odd adverbial 'from here to there'. Use the simple present 'travel' to describe habitual action, 'most people' (not 'mostly people'), 'from place to place' or 'around' for natural expression, and 'by bike' (singular) to indicate mode of transport.