Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap doğal ancak pek çok dolgu kelime (uh) ve tekrar içeriyor; cümle yapısını düzeltip daha net destekleyici detaylar eklemelisin. Söyleyeceğin bilgiyi konu cümlesiyle doğrudan ver, ardından tutarlı bağlaçlarla (for example, every weekend) ek bilgi sun. Ayrıca fiil hatasını düzelt: “read it to the park” yerine “ride it to the park” kullanılmalı. Maksimum 3-4 kısa cümleyle ifade et.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a pink bicycle as a child and I often rode it to the park. For example, my parents would take me there every weekend, and I remember practising turns and balance with my father. Those outings helped me become confident on a bike.

제안: Cevap kısa, tekrarlı ve tamamlanmamış; mantıklı bir gerekçe ve spesifik örnekler eklemelisin. Konu cümlesiyle doğrudan cevap ver, sonra neden popüler olduğunu açıklayan iki kısa destekleyici cümle kullan (örneğin ulaşım, okul etkinlikleri, altyapı). Fazla dolgu kelimelerden kaçın.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips because they are cheap and convenient, and schools often include cycling in PE lessons. For instance, in my town there are bike lanes and weekend markets where lots of people cycle.

× Yes, I did. Uh, I had a pink bicycle when I was a child and uh, I used to read it to the park every weekend with my father and uh, also my mom.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a pink bicycle when I was a child and I used to ride it to the park every weekend with my father and also my mother.

The main error is the wrong verb 'read' instead of 'ride', which is a lexical choice error within verb usage and affects meaning; also 'mom' can be more formal as 'mother' to match register, but 'mom' is acceptable. Use 'ride' for travelling on a bicycle. Keep past habitual 'used to' for repeated past action. Suggestion: replace incorrect verbs with correct collocations (ride a bike), and maintain consistent past tense. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Yes, uh, it is popular in my country, uh, because, uh, when I child, when I was a child, uh, I learned it with my friend and uh, all the PE, all the children and.

✓ Yes, it is popular in my country because when I was a child I learned to ride with my friends and all the children in PE lessons.

Multiple issues: 'when I child' is ungrammatical; should be 'when I was a child' (past tense be). 'I learned it' is unnatural for learning to ride a bike — use 'learned to ride'. 'my friend' should be 'my friends' or 'a friend' depending on meaning; context implies plural so use 'my friends'. The fragment 'all the PE, all the children and' is incomplete; clarified as 'all the children in PE lessons.' Also maintain tense consistency by using past tense. Suggestion: use 'learned to ride', correct subject-number agreement for 'friends', and complete the fragment into a full clause. Grammar problem type ID:1