Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct, grammatically correct and provide a brief reason with specific details. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two supporting details using linking words (e.g., because, so, therefore). Avoid filler sounds like 'uh' and incorrect phrasing such as 'is not fault this.'

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought it was unsafe for me to ride on busy streets. As a result, I mainly walked to school or used public transport, and I only learned to ride a bike as a teenager.

제안: Use plural and add specific supporting details to make the answer natural and informative. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add reasons or examples using linking words (for example, because, since, also). Avoid vague phrasing like 'so popular' without explanation.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, cities often have dedicated bike lanes and bike-sharing schemes, so cycling is a convenient and affordable option for many residents.

× No, I didn't have a bike. My family, uh, is not fault this.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike. It wasn't my family's fault.

The original sentence uses 'is not fault this', which is ungrammatical. The meaning requires a passive construction 'It wasn't my family's fault' or 'My family wasn't to blame.' This fixes pronoun/reference and word order: use 'it' as dummy subject and the possessive form 'my family's' with 'fault' in the fixed expression 'to be at fault' or 'to be to blame.' Also match past tense 'didn't have' with 'wasn't' for consistency.

× Yes, I think the bike is so popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country.

The original sentence uses 'the bike is so popular', which wrongly implies a single specific bike and uses 'so' colloquially. The question asks about bikes in general, so use the plural noun 'bikes' with plural verb 'are' (subject-verb agreement). Replace 'so' with 'very' for a more natural, formal response. This ensures number agreement and clearer meaning.