Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Remove fillers (e.g., 'umm') and correct tense and prepositions (use 'I remember' or 'I used to').

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it with my friends in the yard, and then we would cycle together around the neighborhood on sunny afternoons.

제안: Give a direct, grammatical topic sentence, then support with specific reasons and a linking word. Use correct comparative structures and avoid awkward phrases like 'in here' — say 'here' or 'in my country.'

예시: No, bicycles are not very popular in my country. Instead, most people prefer motorcycles for daily transport because they are faster and more convenient for busy city streets.

× I did have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

Using 'did have' is unnecessary for a simple past affirmative statement. In English, simple past is formed with the past form of the verb (had). 'Did have' is used for emphasis or in questions/negatives. Suggestion: use 'I had' for a natural affirmative past sentence.

× Umm, I remembered playing with my friends in the in the yard will we were where we gather together with our bikes and then just drive to the neighborhood.

✓ I remember playing with my friends in the yard when we gathered together with our bikes and then rode to the neighborhood.

The sentence mixes tenses and has wrong words: 'remembered' (past) can be okay but the rest uses present forms ('gather', 'drive') and 'will' is incorrect. Use past simple consistency: 'remember' or 'remembered' with past verbs. Also 'will' is wrong; 'when' is the correct conjunction. 'Drive' should be past 'rode' for bicycles. Suggestion: keep tense consistent (past) and use correct past participle/past forms where needed.

× In Indonesia bikes apparently not very popular like some European countries, because in here people usually ride motorcycle to go to anywhere.

✓ In Indonesia, bikes are apparently not as popular as in some European countries, because here people usually ride motorcycles to go anywhere.

Multiple issues: missing auxiliary 'are' for present tense passive/description; incorrect comparison structure 'not very popular like' should be 'not as popular as'; 'in here' is unidiomatic—use 'here'; 'ride motorcycle' needs plural 'motorcycles'; 'to go to anywhere' should be 'to go anywhere'. Suggestion: include 'are', use 'not as ... as' for comparisons, pluralize 'motorcycles', and use 'here' and 'anywhere' correctly.

× Bicycles are not mainstream.

✓ Bicycles are not mainstream.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable, but as feedback: it is correct in number and structure. No change needed. Suggestion: you could also say 'Bicycles are not mainstream here' to specify location.