Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Keep your answer concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Use correct grammar for possession and past tense. For example, say who gave the bike and a brief memory or how you used it. Limit to 2–3 sentences to be natural and effective.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me for my eighth birthday, and I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day.

제안: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to add reasons or examples. Avoid filler words and repetitions. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., "popular", "young people", "bike-sharing" or "rental bikes"). Limit to 2–3 sentences and give a specific reason or example, such as convenience, cost, or availability of rental schemes.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially among young people. In recent years bike-sharing schemes have become widespread because they are cheap and convenient for short city trips.

× Yes, I used to have a bike when I was young. And I and I got from my parents.

✓ Yes, I used to have a bike when I was young, and I got it from my parents.

The original sentence repeats 'I and I' which is incorrect and missing the object pronoun for 'got'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and poor sentence structure. Replace the repeated phrase with a single subject 'I' and add the object pronoun 'it' after 'got' to refer to the bike. Also join the clauses with a comma and conjunction for natural flow.

× Yes, it's yes, definitely the bike is the it's popular vehicles for among young people and especially for others these days there's rental bikes.

✓ Yes, definitely bikes are popular among young people, and these days there are rental bikes for others.

This sentence has multiple problems: redundant fillers ('it's yes'), incorrect article and number agreement ('the bike is the it's popular vehicles'), wrong preposition usage ('for among'), and a missing verb in the second clause. The main issues fall under incorrect pronoun/article use and sentence structure. Correct by removing filler words, using plural 'bikes' with plural verb 'are', using 'among' to indicate the group, and adding 'there are' for the existence of rental bikes. Also reorder phrases for clarity.