Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and article use (e.g., “a bike”), and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler phrases like “I don't know why” unless you follow with a reason. Keep the answer within 2–3 sentences.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, I often borrowed my neighbor’s bike to ride to school, so I still enjoyed cycling sometimes.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and follow with a specific reason and example. Use correct grammar (complete clause after “because”), plural/singular agreement, and smoother linking words (e.g., “because,” “for example,” “especially”). Correct word choice: “teenagers” not “Teena teenagers,” and use verbs like “use” or “ride.” Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short journeys and commuting. For example, teenagers and students often ride bikes to school and shops, especially in cities where traffic is heavy.

× To be honest, I had never had bike when I was a child.

✓ To be honest, I had never had a bike when I was a child.

Missing the indefinite article 'a' before the singular countable noun 'bike'. Use 'a' with singular countable nouns. Suggestion: include 'a' -> 'a bike'. Grammar problem type ID: 9

× I don't know why, but yeah.

✓ I don't know why, though.

The original fragment 'but yeah' is informal and does not fit the sentence structure. Replace with 'though' or 'but I don't know why' to make it complete and natural. Suggestion: use 'though' or expand the clause -> 'but I don't know why'. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Yes, I do. I definitely think that bikes are really widespread in my country because.

✓ Yes, I do. I definitely think that bikes are really widespread in my country.

The sentence ends with a dangling 'because' that creates an incomplete subordinate clause. Remove 'because' or complete the clause with a reason. Suggestion: either remove 'because' or add the reason (for example, 'because many people use them daily'). Grammar problem type ID: 26

× The Teena teenagers are used bikes very effectively.

✓ Teenagers in the city of Teena use bikes very effectively.

Original has several issues: 'The Teena teenagers' is awkward article and noun order; 'are used bikes' incorrectly uses passive/auxiliary structure; 'used' should be present simple 'use'. Rephrase to active voice and correct word order. Suggestion: identify the place/ group first if needed ('Teenagers in Teena') and use correct verb form 'use'. 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