Stories— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer clearer and grammatically correct. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct tense and pronouns, and add one or two concise supporting details using linking words. Avoid unnecessary names and repetitions.

예시: Yes. When I was a child I loved stories and I used to go to bed early to listen to my mother tell fairy tales. For example, she often told stories about a princess who fell in love with a prince and lived in a big castle, which made bedtime very exciting.

제안: Give a clear preference and explain with two specific reasons using linking words. Fix grammar, use correct verb forms, and avoid unclear phrases like 'open postcard' and 'storytelled'.

예시: It depends on the situation. If I want to relax after a hectic day, I prefer listening to audiobooks because the narrator's voice helps me unwind; however, if I need detailed information, I choose reading because it is faster to find facts and highlight important points.

제안: Answer directly and expand with a clear supporting detail. Use correct past tense and smoother linking words. Keep it concise and avoid repetition ('as a as a').

예시: No, I didn't write stories, but I drew a lot as a child. For example, I often drew myself as a beautiful princess wearing a pink dress and a big crown, which shows how much I loved imaginative play.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence naming the genre, then compare past and present with one specific reason. Correct grammar and word choice (e.g., 'enjoy' and 'romance novels').

예시: I enjoy romance stories. In fact, my taste has been similar since childhood because I like stories about relationships and emotions; now I usually read contemporary romance novels that focus on realistic characters and emotional development.

× Yes, obviously when I was child I, Zoe went to bed on time to wait for my mom came in and told me a fairy tale story about Princess who fell in love with a Prince and live in a big castle.

✓ Yes, obviously when I was a child I, Zoe, went to bed on time to wait for my mom to come in and tell me a fairy-tale story about a princess who fell in love with a prince and lived in a big castle.

Multiple singular/plural issues: 'child' needs the article 'a' (singular noun countable); 'Princess' and 'Prince' should be lowercase as common nouns; 'a fairy tale story' is redundant—'a fairy-tale story' or 'a fairy tale' is correct. Also 'live' should match past tense 'lived' (addressed in past tense issue). Suggestion: use 'a child', lowercase common nouns, and choose correct noun form 'a fairy-tale story'.

× Yes, obviously when I was child I, Zoe went to bed on time to wait for my mom came in and told me a fairy tale story about Princess who fell in love with a Prince and live in a big castle.

✓ Yes, obviously when I was a child I, Zoe, went to bed on time to wait for my mom to come in and tell me a fairy-tale story about a princess who fell in love with a prince and lived in a big castle.

The clause 'to wait for my mom came in' is ungrammatical: after 'wait for' we need a noun/pronoun or 'to' + base verb. Here the intended structure is 'wait for my mom to come in'. Use base form 'come' with 'to' (not past participle). Suggestion: use 'wait for someone to do something' pattern.

× Yes, obviously when I was child I, Zoe went to bed on time to wait for my mom came in and told me a fairy tale story about Princess who fell in love with a Prince and live in a big castle.

✓ Yes, obviously when I was a child I, Zoe, went to bed on time to wait for my mom to come in and tell me a fairy-tale story about a princess who fell in love with a prince and lived in a big castle.

The narrative is in the past tense, so verbs should be past tense: 'tell' should be 'told' (or restructured as 'to tell' with 'to come'), and 'live' should be 'lived'. Maintain consistent past tense. Suggestion: ensure all narrative verbs match past tense.

× Is depends on some case for instant.

✓ It depends on the case; for instance,

'Is depends' mixes 'is' with the verb 'depends' incorrectly. Correct subject-verb structure is 'It depends'. Also 'some case' is vague; 'the case' or 'the situation' fits. 'for instant' should be 'for instance'. Suggestion: use 'It depends on the situation; for instance,'.

× Whenever I want to relax my mind after my hectic work, I usually open postcard and listening a storytelled or.

✓ Whenever I want to relax after a hectic day at work, I usually open a podcast and listen to a storyteller.

Preposition and word choice errors: 'relax my mind' is acceptable but 'relax' alone is more natural; 'after my hectic work' should be 'after a hectic day at work'; 'open postcard' is incorrect — likely 'open a podcast'; 'listening a storytelled' is wrong: use 'listen to a storyteller' or 'listen to a story'. Also 'storytelled' is not a word. Suggestion: use correct prepositions and nouns: 'listen to' + noun.

× Whenever I want to relax my mind after my hectic work, I usually open postcard and listening a storytelled or.

✓ Whenever I want to relax after a hectic day at work, I usually open a podcast and listen to a storyteller.

After the auxiliary 'usually' we need the base verb 'listen', not the -ing form 'listening'. Use 'listen to' when followed by the content source. Suggestion: use base verb after auxiliaries/modal adverbs (I usually listen).

× But whenever I need to read for information is always.

✓ But whenever I need to read for information, I always read.

This sentence lacks a clear subject-verb structure: 'is always' does not indicate what is always the case. Rephrase to 'I always read' or 'I always prefer reading'. Suggestion: include subject and appropriate verb to complete the clause.

× No, I didn't. But when I was a child I draw many kinds of pictures.

✓ No, I didn't. But when I was a child I drew many kinds of pictures.

The action happened in the past, so the past tense 'drew' is required rather than the present 'draw'. Suggestion: use past tense verbs for past time frames.

× Imagine that's myself on that.

✓ Imagine that's me in them.

'myself' is a reflexive pronoun and is used incorrectly here; 'me' is the correct object pronoun. Also 'on that' is unclear; likely referring to pictures, so 'in them' or 'in those pictures' fits. Suggestion: use 'me' for objects and refer clearly to 'those pictures'.

× As always, draw myself as a as a beautiful Princess who wear a pink dress and have a big crown on my head.

✓ As always, I drew myself as a beautiful princess who wore a pink dress and had a big crown on my head.

'draw myself' is unnatural without subject and tense; use 'I drew myself'. 'myself' here is acceptable but needs correct sentence structure. Also tense and agreement errors: 'wear' and 'have' should be past 'wore' and 'had'. Suggestion: include subject and use past tense for past actions.

× What kind of stories do you like? Student: I think the type of story I read nowadays is nearly the same with the ones which I read in the past when I was a kid.

✓ I think the type of stories I read nowadays is nearly the same as the ones I read in the past when I was a kid.

Use 'same as' not 'same with'. Also 'type of story' vs 'type of stories' — plural 'stories' matches. 'which I read' can be simplified to 'I read'. Suggestion: use 'the same as' and keep noun number consistent.

× Now I'm enjoy reading romance story about Roman take.

✓ Now I enjoy reading romance stories about romantic tales.

Article and noun number errors: 'I'm enjoy' is incorrect verb form (should be 'I enjoy'). 'romance story' should be plural 'romance stories' or 'a romance story'. 'Roman take' is unclear—likely intended 'romantic tales'. Suggestion: use correct verb form 'I enjoy', pluralize nouns as needed, and choose correct vocabulary.

× Now I'm enjoy reading romance story about Roman take.

✓ Now I enjoy reading romance stories about romantic tales.

The contraction 'I'm enjoy' mixes 'am' with the base verb; after 'am' you'd use present participle ('am enjoying') or use simple present 'I enjoy'. The correct third-person singular rule doesn't directly apply here, but the verb form is wrong. Suggestion: use 'I enjoy' or 'I'm enjoying' depending on intended meaning.