Gifts— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then briefly explain who you give gifts to and why. Keep it within 2–3 sentences and avoid unnecessary words.

예시: Yes, I enjoy giving gifts to people who are close to me. I usually choose something thoughtful for family members or close friends because I like to show appreciation for our relationship.

제안: Provide a clear structured answer: state occasions first, then give one or two specific examples. Use linking words like "for example" and correct plural forms.

예시: I usually give gifts on special occasions, such as birthdays, anniversaries, and graduations. For example, I buy a small present for my parents on their anniversary and give friends cards and cakes for their birthdays.

제안: Start with a concise topic sentence stating the main consideration, then give specific reasons and an example. Use correct prepositions and collocations ("consider a practical gift", "suits the person").

예시: I usually consider practicality when choosing a gift because I want the recipient to use it. For instance, I might buy a good-quality mug for a friend who drinks coffee every day because it suits their habits.

제안: Make the answer grammatically correct and coherent. Say briefly whether you have given a handmade gift, describe what it was, how you made or chose it, and why it mattered. Use linking words like "for example" or "for instance".

예시: Yes, I have given handmade gifts. For example, I once sewed a small fabric pouch for a friend to hold coins and keys because she liked handmade items and I thought it would be useful.

제안: Give a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons and an example. Avoid filler sounds and unclear phrases. Use linking phrases like "because" and "for example."

예시: No, I don't think expensive gifts express feelings better because thoughtfulness matters more than price. For example, a handwritten letter or a practical item that fits someone's needs can show you know and care about them more than an expensive but impersonal present.

× Yes, I usually give a gift for the someone that related to me.

✓ Yes, I usually give a gift to someone who is related to me.

Incorrect quantifier/article: 'the someone' is ungrammatical; use the indefinite pronoun 'someone'. Also use the preposition 'to' with 'give' and a relative clause 'who is related to me' rather than 'that related to me'. Suggestion: say 'to someone who is related to me'. (Grammar problem type ID: 14)

× I usually give a gift to another in special events such as anniversary, birthday day are orders, congratulations.

✓ I usually give gifts on special occasions such as anniversaries, birthdays, or to celebrate achievements.

Multiple issues: wrong pronoun 'another' and wrong preposition 'in'. Use plural 'gifts' for habitual action. 'Special events' is better as 'special occasions'. 'Anniversary' and 'birthday' should be plural when speaking generally, and 'are orders' is nonsensical; use 'or to celebrate achievements' or 'congratulations' as a purpose. Also replace 'to another' with no pronoun or 'to others'. (Grammar problem type ID: 12)

× I consider about practical gift because I think that a gift should be something practical and suit with that person that I give.

✓ I consider practical gifts because I think a gift should be something practical and suit the person I give it to.

'Consider about' is incorrect; 'consider' does not take 'about'. Use 'consider practical gifts'. 'Suit with' is wrong; use 'suit' or 'be suitable for'. Also word order: 'the person I give it to' is correct instead of 'that person that I give'. Use plural 'gifts' for general statements. (Grammar problem type ID: 11)

× Yes I have I have been give us handmade gift that create by some of fabric and is. Used together until it's back.

✓ Yes, I have. I was given a handmade gift that was made from fabric and we used it together until it wore out.

Multiple tense and form errors: 'I have I have been give us' is ungrammatical. Use past passive 'I was given' or present perfect 'I have been given'. 'Create by' should be 'made from' and 'is. Used together until it's back' is unclear—likely intended 'used together until it wore out'. Ensure verb forms match past events. (Grammar problem type ID: 5)

× No, and in my perspective I ex uh skip should be a practical gift. I would express that more than the expensive gift.

✓ No. From my perspective, a practical gift is better; it expresses more than an expensive gift.

Disfluent filler 'ex uh skip' should be removed. Sentence fragments joined awkwardly; restructure for clarity. Use comparative structure 'is better' and 'expresses more than an expensive gift'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and clear comparison. (Grammar problem type ID: 26)