Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ понятен, но требует улучшения структуры и естественности. Сократите излишнюю детализацию, исправьте грамматические ошибки (например, добавьте артикли: "a student", "she was rich enough" звучит неестественно) и используйте связующие слова для плавности. Дайте более конкретную информацию о ситуации (когда это было, сколько или почему вам понадобились деньги) в одной-двух дополнительных фразах. Общее количество предложений не должно превышать 5.

예시: Yes. When I was a student I once borrowed money from a close friend because I didn’t have enough for my tuition fee. She came from a well-off family and her parents supported her, so she kindly lent me about $200. As a result, I managed to pay the fee on time and repaid her the following month.

제안: Ответ информативен, но содержит грамматические ошибки и повторения. Нужно использовать правильные времена и формы (например, "I also lend" → "I have lent" или "I lend" depending on habit), убрать тавтологию и уточнить размеры/условия займа. Добавьте связующие слова для логики (for example, however) и конкретный пример одной ситуации. Старайтесь не превышать 5 предложений.

예시: Yes, I often lend money to close friends when they have short-term problems. For example, last year I lent a friend about $50 to cover groceries, and she paid me back within two weeks. Occasionally my mother asks me for money, but I usually prefer to give her small gifts rather than formal loans.

× I remember I borrowed money from my friend when I was student.

✓ I remember I borrowed money from my friend when I was a student.

Missing article 'a' before 'student'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. Add 'a' to make the noun phrase grammatically correct. Suggestion: use 'a student' or 'the student' depending on context.

× Sure, I also lend money to others.

✓ Sure, I also lend money to others.

This sentence is acceptable in simple present if describing a habit. No grammatical correction needed. Keep simple present for habitual actions. (Included for completeness.)

× Sometimes my mom asked me to lend money to her, but usually I just gifted money to her.

✓ Sometimes my mom asks me to lend her money, but usually I just give her money as a gift.

Two errors: Verb tense consistency and incorrect verb choice. 'Asked' should be 'asks' to match habitual meaning (present simple). 'Gifted' is incorrect usage as a verb in this context; native speakers say 'give as a gift' or 'gift' in limited contexts. Also word order 'lend money to her' is awkward; better 'lend her money'. Suggestions: Use present simple for habitual actions and use 'give her money' or 'give her money as a gift'.

× It was not big amount of money if somebody will ask me for big amount of money.

✓ It was not a big amount of money if somebody asked me for a large amount of money.

Multiple issues: Article missing before 'big amount' ('a big amount'). Conditional/time clause requires past tense 'asked' to match 'was' for past hypothetical. Also use 'large amount' or 'a large sum' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and include articles; consider rephrasing: 'It was not a large amount of money if someone asked me for it.'