Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 発音と文法の誤りを直し、より自然で簡潔な構造にする必要があります。具体的には時制と語順（"I borrowed money from my friends when I forgot my audit" は意味が不明瞭）を明確にし、余分な語句を省きます。また、接続詞を使って理由をはっきり示すとよいです。例：借りた状況を簡潔に述べ、その後普段の支払い方法を対比的に説明する。語彙は日常表現（credit card, cash, forget, bill, payment）を使い、文は3文以内に収めてください。

예시: Yes. Once I borrowed money from a friend because I had forgotten my wallet at home. However, I usually pay with my credit card, so I rarely use cash.

제안: 文法と語彙の選択を改善する必要があります（"rent the money"は誤用）。貸した理由と結果を簡潔に述べ、適切な接続詞でつなぎます。人称・代名詞の使用（her/it）を明確にし、過去形の一貫性を保ちます。提案：一文目で貸した経験を述べ、二文目で返済のタイミングや感情を説明すると自然です。

예시: Yes. I lent money to a friend once when she forgot her wallet, and I didn't mind because she paid me back the next day.

× Yes, I borrowed money from my friends when I forgot my audit, but I usually my credit cards so I rarely use cash.

✓ Yes, I borrowed money from my friends when I forgot my wallet, but I usually use my credit cards so I rarely use cash.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'forgot my audit' is incorrect word choice (should be 'forgot my wallet' or 'forgot my card'); 'I usually my credit cards' is missing the verb 'use'. These are sentence structure and word choice errors. Suggestion: replace 'audit' with 'wallet' (or 'cards') and add the verb 'use' before 'my credit cards' to form a complete clause. Ensure subjects and verbs are present for clarity.

× Yes I rent the money to my friend when she forgot her or it but I didn't mind because she paid me back the next day.

✓ Yes, I lent money to my friend when she forgot hers, but I didn't mind because she paid me back the next day.

The original uses 'rent' (present tense) incorrectly; the past tense of 'lend' is 'lent'. Also 'forgot her or it' is unclear; 'forgot hers' (meaning her money or card) is concise and natural. Suggestion: use 'lent' for past action and replace the unclear phrase with 'forgot hers' or specify 'forgot her wallet'.