Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Clarify your current status with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and vocabulary, and limit to 2–3 sentences. Use linking words to show sequence (e.g., "but", "now"). Be specific about what you are preparing for. Avoid repetitions and pronunciation errors (e.g., 'walk' → 'work').

Exemplo: I'm not working at the moment. I used to work as a sports writer, but I recently left that job and am now preparing my application for a master's degree in the UK.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence describing where you worked, correct vocabulary (use 'work' not 'walk'), and give one specific detail about your role or subject. Use a linking word to connect ideas (e.g., 'and' or 'for example'). Avoid vague phrases like 'it was good' without explanation.

Exemplo: I don't work now, but I used to work from home as a sports writer. For example, I often wrote match previews about the Mechi team, which I enjoyed because it let me analyse tactics and interview players.

Sugestão: Give a direct judgement first, then two specific reasons using correct verbs (e.g., 'work from home') and linking words ('because', 'so'). Avoid repetition and awkward phrasing. Be concise and specific about advantages.

Exemplo: Yes, it was a good place to work for me because I worked from home, so I could start working as soon as I woke up. This saved commuting time and made my schedule more flexible.

Sugestão: Answer directly, then give two clear, specific benefits using past/present forms correctly. Use linking words ('because', 'so', 'for example') and avoid filler words ('uh', 'umm'). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I liked working there because I worked from home until last year. For example, I could eat lunch at home and save money on transport, which made my daily routine easier.

Sugestão: State your future career goal clearly using correct vocabulary (e.g., 'work as a data analyst' or 'human data analyst' if that's intended). Explain one specific area you want to work in and a reason. Remove repetitions and filler words, and use linking words to expand briefly.

Exemplo: In the future I would like to work as a data analyst, focusing on human-centred data rather than big data. For example, I want to analyse user behaviour to improve product design and decision-making.

× I'm not working or starting.

✓ I'm not working or studying.

The student likely meant they are not working or studying. 'Starting' is incorrect here; use the noun 'studying' to parallel 'working' and correctly express the state of being a student. Replace the verb 'starting' with the gerund 'studying' to form a correct coordinate structure.

× I used to walk as a a sports writer but I just left my job and now I'm preparing for apply to master's degree in the UK.

✓ I used to work as a sports writer, but I recently left my job and now I'm preparing to apply for a master's degree in the UK.

Multiple problems: 'walk' should be 'work' (word choice), double 'a' removed, 'just left' is acceptable but 'recently left' is clearer, and the verb pattern is incorrect: 'preparing to apply for' is the correct verb + infinitive and preposition structure. Use 'master's degree' with possessive form and include the preposition 'for'.

× Where do you work?>

✓ Where do you work?

This appears to be a punctuation/formatting error: remove the stray '>' character to form a proper question.

× I'm not working at the moment, but I used to walk walk as a sports writer.

✓ I'm not working at the moment, but I used to work as a sports writer.

Replace 'walk' with 'work' (correct verb) and remove the duplicated word. 'Used to work' correctly indicates a past habitual job.

× I prefer writing about Mechi for preview and it was good.

✓ I prefer writing previews about matches, and it was good.

The sentence has unclear word choices: 'Mechi' likely meant 'matches', and 'for preview' is incorrect; use 'writing previews about matches'. Keep tense consistent: 'it was good' can remain if referring to past experience. Ensure noun forms 'preview' -> 'previews'.

× For me it was good because I walked from home, so I usually walk after as soon as I wake up.

✓ For me it was good because I worked from home, so I usually start working as soon as I wake up.

Replace 'walked' with 'worked' to indicate employment. 'I usually start working as soon as I wake up' correctly expresses habitual action and proper verb collocation. 'After' is unnecessary and incorrect there.

× It's really time efficient.

✓ It's really time-efficient.

Use the compound adjective 'time-efficient' with a hyphen when placed before or after the verb. This is an adjective describing the situation.

× Would you like the place where you work?

✓ Would you like the place where you worked?

Context asks if the student liked the place where they worked in the past. Use past tense 'worked' to match the time frame since the student no longer works there.

× Yes, of course, because I work from I worked from home, uh, until last year.

✓ Yes, of course, because I worked from home until last year.

Remove duplication and filler. Use past tense 'worked' to indicate the action continued until last year. 'I work from' is incorrect in this past context.

× Umm, I can just have lunch at home and I can save my money for transport.

✓ I could just have lunch at home, and I could save money on transport.

Use 'could' to express ability in past habitual context (since they worked from home before). 'Save money on transport' is the correct collocation; 'my money for transport' is unnatural.

× I would like to walk as like a human data analyst, but it's not just a focus on on the mega data I want to want to work uh for.

✓ I would like to work as a human data analyst, but I don't want to focus only on big data.

Replace 'walk' with 'work'. Remove duplicated filler and incorrect prepositions. Use 'work as' for a job role. 'Big data' is the correct term rather than 'mega data'. 'Don't want to focus only on' expresses the intended meaning concisely.