FlowersPart 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Do you love flowers?

Candidato

Yes I do. Sometimes I buy small bouquet.

Examinador

Do you know anyone who loves flowers?

Candidato

Yes I do, I have uh, one friend who work at their flower artist before I started to make bouquet from her.

Examinador

Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

Candidato

Yes, there are. I was surprised to watch one kind of flower in our condominium food because it's very unique In Japan, it's a tropical flower.

Examinador

Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?

Candidato

No I don't but when I get yours booger from someone I take a photo them.

Examinador

Do people in your country often send flowers to others?

Candidato

Yes I do, for instance other wedding ceremony or Mother's Day birthdays. Sometimes I give a bucket to my friend.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.5Fluência e coerência: 5.5Pronúncia: 5.5Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.5

Part 1

Do you love flowers?

Pontuação: 62.0

Sugestão: 答えは簡潔で良いですが、文法ミスや語彙の誤用があり、情報が少ないです。例えば冠詞や単数・複数の一致、自然なフレーズ("buy a small bouquet")に直す必要があります。また、理由や頻度を一つ追加すると回答が充実します。具体的には、話の冒頭で肯定の返答→補足(頻度や理由)という構造を意識してください。

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I often buy a small bouquet, especially when I need to brighten up my room or give a gift to someone.

Do you know anyone who loves flowers?

Pontuação: 48.0

Sugestão: 内容は伝わりますが構文・時制・語順の誤りが多く、不自然な表現が目立ちます。主語と動詞の一致("a friend who works")、職業表現("is a florist" または "works as a floral artist")、受け身や時制の整理("taught me")を直すと明確になります。簡潔な主文→補足(どのように教わったか)という順で話しましょう。

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I have a friend who works as a florist, and she taught me how to make bouquets before I tried it on my own.

Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

Pontuação: 45.0

Sugestão: 意味は推測できますが語彙の選び方や表現が不自然です("watch" や "food" は誤用、接続や句読点も改善が必要)。場所や驚いた理由を明確にし、接続詞で文をつなぐとよいです。例えば“there are many flowers”→“I was surprised to find a tropical species in our condominium”のように言い換え、具体的な特徴を一つ添えましょう。

Exemplo: Yes, there are many flowers around here. I was surprised to find a tropical species growing in our condominium garden because that kind of flower is usually only seen in warmer regions.

Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?

Pontuação: 40.0

Sugestão: 否定の後に条件を付ける構造は良いですが、誤字や代名詞の使い方が混乱しています("yours booger" は意味不明、代名詞の一致)。"when I receive a bouquet from someone, I take a photo of it" のように正しい語彙と一致を使ってください。また、頻度や理由を一言加えると自然になります。

Exemplo: No, I don't usually, but when I receive a bouquet from someone I often take a photo of it to remember the occasion.

Do people in your country often send flowers to others?

Pontuação: 42.0

Sugestão: 質問は一般の習慣についてですが答えが個人的で語彙の誤り("Yes I do"→"Yes"、"other wedding ceremony"や"Mother's Day birthdays"の不自然さ、"bucket"→"bouquet")があります。一般的な習慣を示すなら、例(weddings, Mother's Day)を挙げ、その後に個人的行動を短く補足すると良いです。

Exemplo: Yes. People often send flowers for occasions like weddings, Mother's Day and birthdays. For example, I sometimes give a bouquet to a friend on special days.

Gramática

Article errors

× Yes I do. Sometimes I buy small bouquet.

Yes, I do. Sometimes I buy a small bouquet.

The noun 'bouquet' is countable and singular here, so it requires an article 'a'. Add a comma after 'Yes' for natural spoken punctuation. Suggestion: use 'a' before singular countable nouns and include a comma after interjections like 'Yes'.

Subject-verb agreement errors

× Yes I do, I have uh, one friend who work at their flower artist before I started to make bouquet from her.

Yes, I do. I have, uh, one friend who worked as a floral artist before I started to make bouquets from her.

Multiple issues: subject-verb agreement: 'friend who work' should be past tense 'worked' to match 'before I started'. 'Work as' is the correct collocation for a job role. 'Their' is incorrect for singular; use context-appropriate pronoun or rephrase. 'Flower artist' is better expressed as 'floral artist'. 'Bouquet' should be plural 'bouquets' if referring to making many. Suggestions: match verb tense to time markers, use 'worked as', use consistent pronouns or rephrase to avoid 'their' for a known person.

There be issue

× Yes, there are. I was surprised to watch one kind of flower in our condominium food because it's very unique In Japan, it's a tropical flower.

Yes, there are. I was surprised to see one kind of flower in our condominium yard because it's very unique. In Japan, it's a tropical flower.

Use 'see' rather than 'watch' for noticing something stationary like a flower. 'Condominium food' is incorrect; likely 'condominium yard' or 'grounds'. Capitalization: 'In' should be lowercase unless starting sentence. Also split into two sentences for clarity. Suggestion: choose correct noun for location and use 'see' for perceiving an object.

Modal verb usage

× No I don't but when I get yours booger from someone I take a photo them.

No, I don't, but when I get your bouquet from someone I take a photo of it.

Many errors: 'yours' should be 'your' when modifying a noun. 'Booger' is a misspelling; correct is 'bouquet'. 'Take a photo them' is wrong—use 'take a photo of it' for singular. Add commas for spoken pauses. Suggestion: use 'your bouquet' and 'take a photo of it'.

Sentence structure errors

× Yes I do, for instance other wedding ceremony or Mother's Day birthdays. Sometimes I give a bucket to my friend.

Yes, we do. For instance, for weddings or Mother's Day and birthdays, people often send flowers. Sometimes I give a bouquet to my friend.

Original sentences are fragmented and contain word choice errors. 'Yes I do' should match the question about people in your country—'Yes, we do' or 'Yes, people do'. 'Other wedding ceremony' is incorrect; use 'weddings' or 'wedding ceremonies'. 'Mother's Day birthdays' conflates two occasions; separate them as 'Mother's Day and birthdays'. 'Bucket' is wrong word for a bunch of flowers; use 'bouquet'. Suggestion: rephrase to clear plural subjects and correct nouns like 'bouquet'.

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