Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Perbaiki tatabahasa dan struktur ayat. Mulakan dengan ayat topik yang jelas, kemudian jelaskan sebab dengan terperinci menggunakan perkataan penghubung. Elakkan ayat terganggu dan gunakan bentuk yang betul untuk 'allergic to' dan hasilnya.

Exemplo: No, I don't. I'm allergic to flowers, so when I smell them I start sneezing and my eyes get watery.

Sugestão: Perbaiki penggunaan subjek dan kata kerja (agreement) serta susunan ayat. Gunakan penghubung untuk mengaitkan pernyataan tentang ibu anda dan sebab anda tidak suka bunga. Elakkan pengulangan perkataan yang tidak perlu.

Exemplo: Yes, my mother loves flowers. She waters and cares for her plants every day, but I don't share her interest because I'm allergic to them.

Sugestão: Berikan jawapan yang lebih lengkap dan jelas. Mula dengan menyatakan keadaan umum di kawasan anda, kemudian beri contoh spesifik (contoh: di rumah saya) menggunakan ayat penuh dan penghubung untuk kesinambungan.

Exemplo: There are quite a few flowers around my home because my mother cares for many plants. She spends time every day watering and looking after them.

Sugestão: Bentuk jawapan yang tepat dan konsisten. Nyatakan terus menjawab soalan (Yes/No), beri sebab yang jelas, dan jika sesuai, sebut perubahan kebiasaan atau pengecualian secara ringkas.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers because my allergies make it uncomfortable to be near them.

Sugestão: Perbaiki kosa kata dan struktur untuk menjelaskan situasi budaya. Gunakan istilah yang tepat seperti 'celebrate' -> 'celebrations' dan 'after childbirth' atau 'new mothers'. Susun ayat lengkap dan gunakan penghubung untuk kelancaran.

Exemplo: Yes, people often send flowers during celebrations and to congratulate new mothers after childbirth.

× No, because I have allergy of a flower.

✓ No, because I have an allergy to flowers.

Use 'have an allergy to' or 'be allergic to' with plural for general statements. 'Allergy of a flower' is incorrect preposition and singular; use article 'an' before 'allergy' and 'to' as the correct preposition. Also pluralize 'flowers' for a general cause. Suggestion: say 'I have an allergy to flowers' or 'I'm allergic to flowers.'

× If I smell the flower I can.

✓ If I smell flowers, I sneeze / I have a reaction.

The original is incomplete: 'I can' lacks an object or verb. Use a complete clause to show the consequence of smelling flowers. Also use plural 'flowers' for generality and add a comma before the conditional clause. Suggestion: 'If I smell flowers, I sneeze.'

× My mom my mom really love the flower, I saw he every day give a water for her flower and take care the flower but I don't really like that because I am allergic to them.

✓ My mom really loves flowers; I saw her every day give water to her plants and take care of them, but I don't really like that because I am allergic to them.

Multiple issues: pronoun 'he' should be 'her' (incorrect pronoun). Subject-verb agreement 'love' should be 'loves' for third person singular. 'The flower' should be plural 'flowers' or 'plants' for generality, and prepositions: 'give a water for her flower' -> 'give water to her plants'. Also add conjunctions/punctuation to join clauses and pronoun 'them' to match plural 'plants'. Suggestion: 'My mom really loves flowers; I saw her give water to her plants every day and take care of them.'

× Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

✓ Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

This question is already correct. 'Are there' is the proper form for asking about existence and plural nouns. No change needed.

× I think my house because my mom love flower and. Take care of her plan every day.

✓ I think so, because at my house my mom loves flowers and takes care of her plants every day.

Pronoun and sentence structure: add 'so' to answer the question, include 'at my house' for clarity. 'My mom love' requires third person singular 'loves'. 'Love flower' should be plural 'flowers' or 'plants', and 'Take care' needs subject and correct verb form 'takes care'. 'Plan' likely intended 'plant(s)'. Suggestion: 'I think so; at my house my mom loves flowers and takes care of her plants every day.'

× I am not because I am too allergic to flower. I can take photo.

✓ No, I don't, because I'm too allergic to flowers. I can't take photos.

Use appropriate negation for habitual action: 'I am not' is incorrect here; use 'No, I don't' to answer 'Do you take photos?'. 'Allergic to flower' should be 'allergic to flowers' (plural) and 'I can take photo' contradicts allergic statement and lacks modal negative: use 'I can't take photos'. Also pluralize 'photos'. Suggestion: 'No, I don't, because I'm too allergic to flowers. I can't take photos.'

× Yes, when they have a celebrate and give to women who just uh, delivery a pregnancy.

✓ Yes, when they have a celebration or when a woman has just given birth, people often give flowers to her.

Multiple errors: 'have a celebrate' should be 'have a celebration' (incorrect word form/article). 'Give to women who just uh, delivery a pregnancy' is ungrammatical: 'delivery a pregnancy' should be 'have just given birth' or 'just delivered a baby'. Also clarify singular/plural and article use: 'give flowers to women' or 'give flowers to a woman who has just given birth.' Suggestion: 'Yes, they often give flowers during celebrations or to women who have just given birth.'