Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Nên tóm tắt trực tiếp câu trả lời đầu tiên, sửa ngữ pháp và trật tự từ, và dùng các cụm từ tự nhiên để mô tả thời tiết. Cần giảm lặp từ, chia câu rõ ràng và sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho mô tả thói quen. Ví dụ: nêu trước nơi bạn sống, sau đó mô tả ngắn gọn hiện tại và thói quen kèm lý do.

Exemplo: I live in Hanoi, the capital of Vietnam. The city has four distinct seasons, but at the moment it is very hot. I usually carry a bottle of water whenever I go out because of the heat.

Sugestão: Cần trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích ngắn gọn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp từ. Dùng linking words hợp lý (for example, also, because) và mô tả cụ thể hơn lý do thích lạnh (hoạt động, cảm giác, quần áo). Giữ dưới 5 câu.

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because I find it more comfortable. For example, I was born in December and enjoy wearing warm clothes like coats and scarves. Cold weather makes me feel relaxed and gives me energy to do outdoor activities.

Sugestão: Cần viết câu hoàn chỉnh, sửa ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp (e.g. rainy weather, wet conditions). Nên nêu lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ thực tế (quần áo, nhà cửa). Tránh cấu trúc lủng củng và lặp từ.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because my clothes dry faster and it's easier to go outside. For instance, heavy rain can make the house muddy and uncomfortable, so I find dry days more convenient.

Sugestão: Cần dùng thì và mạo từ chính xác (I often check), sắp xếp trật tự thời gian (at night, before school). Nên mô tả rõ tần suất và mục đích cụ thể (chọn quần áo, mang ô, mang nước). Sử dụng linking words để mạch lạc.

Exemplo: Yes, I check the weather regularly. I usually check it on my phone at night and again before I go to school. This helps me choose suitable clothes and decide whether to bring an umbrella or water.

Sugestão: Cần lập luận rõ ràng, dùng thuật ngữ chính xác (climate change, pollution, greenhouse gases) và đưa ra hậu quả cụ thể (rising temperatures, extreme weather, sea level). Tránh câu mơ hồ và lỗi ngữ pháp; nên dùng liên từ để nối ý rõ ràng.

Exemplo: I think climate change is caused by human activities like burning fossil fuels and producing a lot of waste. As a result, global temperatures are rising, extreme weather events are more frequent, and sea levels are increasing.

Sugestão: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và giải thích lý do rõ ràng. Sửa ngữ pháp và cụm từ (different countries, experience different climates, learn how to adapt). Nên nêu ví dụ cụ thể về một nơi muốn đến và điều bạn muốn trải nghiệm hoặc học hỏi.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I enjoy traveling. For example, I want to visit a snowy city to experience winter sports and learn how people dress and live in cold conditions.

× 'Well I live in Hanoi which is a capital city of Vietnam.'

✓ 'Well, I live in Hanoi, which is the capital city of Vietnam.'

'The definite article the is required before unique nouns like capital city to indicate a specific item; commas are needed for the non-restrictive clause. Suggestion: use the definite article the and add commas to set off the clause.'

× 'The city has Four Seasons so this always change climate, but currently the weather is very hot and I often bring water to when I'm go out.'

✓ 'The city has four seasons, so the climate always changes, but currently the weather is very hot and I often bring water when I go out.'

'Four seasons' should be lowercased unless part of a proper name; use plural verb changes to agree with singular subject climate? Here climate (singular) with 'changes' or more naturally 'the climate always changes' and correct word order 'bring water when I go out.' Also remove extra to and correct go tense.'

× 'I prefer cold weather.'

✓ 'I prefer cold weather.'

'Sentence is correct in present simple to express a general preference; no change needed.'

× 'Firstly, I was born in December which is the winter season in my country, so it's very cold.'

✓ 'Firstly, I was born in December, which is the winter season in my country, so it is usually very cold then.'

'Was born' correctly uses past simple for a past event. Add commas for the non-restrictive clause and use present simple adverb 'usually' or 'then' to indicate typical weather in that month.'

× 'Moreover, I very enjoy wear clothes winter this very beautiful the cold climate make me feel comfortable in.'

✓ 'Moreover, I really enjoy wearing winter clothes; the cold climate makes me feel comfortable.'

'Very' cannot modify 'enjoy' in this context; use adverb really. Use the gerund wearing after enjoy, and adjective order 'winter clothes'. Use correct verb agreement makes for the singular subject climate. Break into two clearer sentences.'

× 'I prefer dry weather, this make my clothes dry quickly.'

✓ 'I prefer dry weather; this makes my clothes dry quickly.'

'Make' must agree with singular subject this, so use makes. Also use a semicolon or period to join independent clauses.'

× 'Sometime had no has wet weather in raining this make my house very dirty and this make me feel uncomfortable.'

✓ 'Sometimes there is no dry spell and heavy rain makes my house very dirty, which makes me feel uncomfortable.'

'Sometime' should be sometimes. The original mixes tenses and auxiliary verbs incorrectly. Use there is for existence (There is/are), and make subject-verb agreement: heavy rain makes; which makes me feel uncomfortable.'

× 'Well checking the weather is very important with me when I'm go out.'

✓ 'Well, checking the weather is very important to me when I go out.'

'Important to someone' is the correct prepositional pattern, not important with. Also correct present simple I go out instead of I'm go out.'

× 'I often checking it on my phone in the night or before I'm going to school.'

✓ 'I often check it on my phone at night or before I go to school.'

'Often' should be used with base verb check in present simple: I often check. Use at night not in the night. Use before I go to school (present simple), not before I'm going.'

× 'This make me people suitable clothes and water in fun day.'

✓ 'This helps me choose suitable clothes and remember to bring water on a hot day.'

'Make me people' is ungrammatical; clarify meaning: 'helps me choose'. Use bring water and 'on a hot day' for correct preposition. Also subject-verb agreement: helps.'

× 'Well, nowadays people use many technology item and created a lot of waste, so this make a serious climate change in the globalization, so the climate never cold is very hot.'

✓ 'Well, nowadays people use many technological items and create a lot of waste, so this causes serious climate change globally, making the climate less often cold and more hot.'

'Technology item' should be technological items (adjective + plural noun). Use present simple create for general fact. Use causes to show result and globally instead of in the globalization. Rephrase for clarity: 'making the climate less often cold and hotter.'

× 'Yes of course, because I really enjoy traveling especially in different country so I'm never avoid climate change in different countries so I think I would learn to way suitable.'

✓ 'Yes, of course, because I really enjoy traveling, especially to different countries, so I do not avoid different climates; I think I would learn how to adapt.'

'In different country' should be to different countries. 'I'm never avoid' is incorrect; use I do not avoid or I never avoid, and 'learn to way suitable' is unclear—use learn how to adapt. Also add commas for clarity.'